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Dude232
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Posted: 25th Mar 2008 03:06 Edited at: 17th May 2008 16:28
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My first single player game Reality Check. It is a scifi game. Here is a new story thanks to Gunn3r.

My name is Conner Williams. At 17 years old, I have it all: a dad who loves to hunt, a hot girlfriend and great grades at school. Recently, rumors have started to pop up about the nearby EcoMission Warehouse. People are saying that the warehouse isn't that at all. It's some sort of training facility. Against my better judgement, I decided to find the truth behind all these rumors. What was in that warehouse?
One night, while my dad was at work, I decided to sneak out, taking a blaster with 2 rounds in it. As I reached for the door on the side of the facility, only the noise of the hovercars zooming over head filled my ears. I was hesitant to open that door. I'm not sure why I did, honestly. When I went through, the door behind me slammed with a metal clang. The first door I came upon was marked: "Virtual Reality Training". So that was it. It wasn't really a warehouse at all, but a training ground for some sort soldier. Again, curiousity got the better half of me, and I found myself entering that training room. Why I did it, I'm not quite sure, but this is my Reality Check.


Okay the rest will come in the game. I have level one done which is the "warehouse" itself and have level two done and i am not going to tell you about that here is a screen of level two for you. Thats all i will show you until i get level one screens which are comin in a little bit.





The game has been finished here is the download: http://www.filefactory.com/file/cce3dd/

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Dude232
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Posted: 25th Mar 2008 03:22 Edited at: 25th Mar 2008 03:30
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Here are two screeens of level one:


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Gunn3r
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Story isn't that bad. A little cliche, but not that bad.

Here's a rewrite. Same story, but a little more gripping.

My name is Conner Williams. At 17 years old, I have it all: a dad who loves to hunt, a hot girlfriend and great grades at school. Recently, rumors have started to pop up about the nearby EcoMission Warehouse. People are saying that the warehouse isn't that at all. It's some sort of training facility. Against my better judgement, I decided to find the truth behind all these rumors. What was in that warehouse?
One night, while my dad was at work, I decided to sneak out, taking a blaster with 2 rounds in it. As I reached for the door on the side of the facility, only the noise of the hovercars zooming over head filled my ears. I was hesitant to open that door. I'm not sure why I did, honestly. When I went through, the door behind me slammed with a metal clang. The first door I came upon was marked: "Virtual Reality Training". So that was it. It wasn't really a warehouse at all, but a training ground for some sort soldier. Again, curiousity got the better half of me, and I found myself entering that training room. Why I did it, I'm not quite sure, but this is my Reality Check.

Hope you like it. Feel free to use whatever part of it you want.

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Dude232
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Thanks i edited my post and changed the story. This is my first game with a reason to it so i really am not going to be good at the voices and everything so ill have to buy a microphone and work on it.

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Gunn3r
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When you get something resembling a demo or a beta, or even a level or two, sign up for the Gunn3r Games forums and have it reviewed. I'll review it for you and tell you some helpful stuff. Instead of, "You need to work on entity placement", you'll get "The barrel in the corner would also look good in front of the shelves and you might want to change the light value on the light underneath the stairs to something just a tad higher."

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actually i will be able to have a demo in a while just to say level one is very short.

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Alright. Just send it to me on the Gunn3r Games forums and I'll give you as in-depth of a review as I can.

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Dude232
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uploading demo right now...

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I'll get you your review as soon as I can.

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Dude232
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Okay the game is on you forum place Gunn3r and here is the download link for the demo: http://www.upitus.com/download.php?file=b79cfcea
and also why is Gunn3r the onl one posting here?

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Lol. Anyway, I've got your review done and posted. Head on over to check it out when you get a chance.

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Sounds interesting. But why can't I see the screeny?

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i going to say the review you gave me ws really good and yes i like the platforming also. and you start in that first level because i was trying to make it where you just enter the building in the story or i could just take out the level but thanks Gunn3r

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New Screens!!!

go through the maze of floating sticks

the pit

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No problem. It's why I created that, so that people can get a good review of their game so that they can get better overall, and make a better game.

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can anybody do voice acting? i need a 17 year old sounding voice to put in the game

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i have just edited the txture for the virtual segment im using to have a fake bump texture here is a screen of new texture.

and yes i use Gimp...

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level 3 is done now i have to work on level 4 and i messed with the ending... you are going to be suprised... and sorry for th triple post

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I re-did your review on GGI. It looks better, but essentially says the same things.

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read the review.. okay i have already added light sources but the virtual levels will have no light sources... fixed some entities to static... and no i am not going to add haders because many cant view them or i could make a shader version and a non-shader version... updated texture to bump a little... and this is my first overall game that i actually put work into (except for my only games multiplayer ones) and i really want somebody else insteadof Gunn3r to post i really want some comments

Edit: working on next level right now... I call it Darkness just to say it includes a HUGE pitch black pit that may never end

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new screen of the level Darkness

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Wow, great stuff!

The pics look great, especiall the "level of darkness" one.


Will be following this one. Keep it up!

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thanks for the comment any more comments?

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Darkness looks good. The maze looks a bit "meh" tbh ;p

I spose you could use it to your advantage though. Why not have the start levels have a very bright white light, but as you proceed, the lights get dimmer and dimmer and dimmer. This could symbolise the difficulty getting harder, or simply that the puzzled are becoming more dangerous. Just an idea!

Oh, unless the sci-fi setting is crucial to the storyline, I think it would be cool to have this in a modern setting so that it is much more shocking when you find this super high tech virtual reality training centre. Just a suggestion


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i still have school so it may be a while before release... and a new thread will be made for the release just to say level 4 is done

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level five is now done and this game will be ten levels atleast so keep your eye out for when i release it

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sorry for triple post because this is a bump and new video of the game!! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jwj0gLriTnk&feature=relatedthis game is in progress if people stop pushing the thread down

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Yeah that post is why this thread is getting pushed down.

Great contribution to your own game thread.
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I just wondered if you are using our Generic Pack... good to see someone uses it (i looked into the Files of the game )

Looks quite interesting... especially the Darkness Level


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yes i am using your pack and i really like it it is what i really needed

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new screens of level 6 (or what i call it... twisted) which features ALOT of boxes floating with noe gravity and pits with platforms that collapse under you weight...starting placeBad news... when i loaded level one in the editor to test it the level went all weird... segments were missing and everything was flashing even though shaders werent on so i will have to make level one again and it will have a better entity placement this time

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Pretty nice looking pics Dude232

PS. I would like to do some voice acting (I'm 16 but soon 17)

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here is some screens of the new level one...

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new screens of level one...

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bumpety bump

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Lookin nice, and also press that link to the video that you posted, somthing scary happend.
(Scary roll ftw!)

(ps.Im on post moderation.)
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And people say stock media makes a game look bland... good stuff!

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thanks i think stock media is really good you can make a good game with it

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oh and i also will be making a multiplayer level with this so keep out for that...

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Quote: "(ps.Im on post moderation.)"

Personally, I don't think anybody really cares.

@ Dude232: This game looks great, keep up the good work!

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new screens!!!these are from level 6 and the last one is my personal favorite




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bupety bump

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some screens from level 8 and i decided that level nine be a major obstacle course overload with smashing walls moving spikes and all that stuff so i just need help with some models like that (no texture please if you help just .x file) and have a good day

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bump...

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this is like portal, wow kep it up.
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thanks and iu really need some animated moving walls and spikes so i can have the last vurtual level hard

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Great, I can't wait to see your progress on them... You can't make requests, in a showcase thread or not.
Quote: "iu really need some animated moving walls and spikes so i can have the last vurtual level hard"




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sorry but i really need a modeler that does animation that is free i use wings3d so i cant do animation and its hard for me to script...

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What I'm saying is that you can't expect that for free. Maybe $15-20 if they do it REALLY cheap. If you want to make a good game, there are expenses.
Quote: "sorry but i really need a modeler that does animation that is free i use wings3d so i cant do animation and its hard for me to script..."




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just beat the game. It was good

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