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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / [LOCKED] Will people please have a look at my first game.

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twitchy 624
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 18:39
Hey, This is my first major game download. I would aprreciate it if people reviewed it. The premise of the game is very simple and cliche, butit works: Youare a proggramer and when something goes wrong you are transported into your own computer and are at the mercy of the master proggram, completing its challanges to try to find a way to escape. In the game itself there are no elements of a story at this time (I was thinking of using loading screens to make the story come across, but maybey I dont even need it, thats something I would like feedback on)
Heres the demo
http://files.filefront.com/cyber+trap+demozip/;10039895;/fileinfo.html
More Screenshots in a few minutes.Thanks in advance.

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twitchy 624
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 18:39
Another one.

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Zdrok
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 19:12
My god, why make 2 threads?!

Inspire
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 19:32
Dude. If people didn't review it, it's because they didn't see anything worthy of even commenting on.

But here I go with my review.

The first screen is a bland, empty environment. There are three different entities in the room, all of which are stock. There is an obnoxious blue light, which I'm assuming is dynamic, judging by the lack of shadows. The second screeny has no ceiling, and looks like you randomly clicked entities around. Question: why have pillars without a ceiling? That makes no logical sense. And I don't really feel like downloading, but I doubt it will be anything spectacular.

You wanted a review, there you go.

Maxim999
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 22:39
Okay, im going to be straight forward since im in a bad mood,
This honestly looks like crap, You used Tron as the main story like, you didnt even bother to PLAN where you put your entities. Gee i see even more and more worthless games around here.
F0aMy
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Posted: 20th Apr 2008 23:14
Hey i must say that ur game looks very gud and gud luk wif the reviews 2....

Leen meen game creating machine!!!
bobert
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Posted: 21st Apr 2008 17:02
Lets see he makes 2 threads. And puts the exact same screeny on each one. uses random media. and what exactly could be harming you in screen 2? the wall?

therapy has taught me not to talk to men with needles
darimc
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Posted: 21st Apr 2008 22:36
The turret in the middle of the room?
Quote: "and what exactly could be harming you in screen 2? the wall?"




bobert
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2008 02:17
a turret, where?

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darimc
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Posted: 23rd Apr 2008 02:32
The middle of the room.
Quote: "a turret, where?"




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