most people who want to see an FPSC game know to go to FPSC Showcase.
while your work may be impressive, that work is quite different from the rest of the work on this thread and will receive less-than-helpful feedback and critique, to put it nicely.
this is the way of things, as i know it.
because you may have seen an FPSC game here, and because you might be able to post yours here(?), doesn't mean "you should", if you get my drift.
that's about as friendly as i can say it. good luck to you!
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