I appreciate honesty. As long as you're being honest and constructive, and not just mindlessly bashing my work, I welcome criticism.
Although I respect your opinion, I'll have to disagree with it. The fonts are all destroyed and beat up and run down looking. This movie is about
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a post apocalyptic zombie-filled world where everything is run down and destroyed.
So I would say they fit very well.
I also think that the music choices were very appropriate. In the movie
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he is the last man on earth, and he is lonely and sad, and has no one (besides his dog, who dies) to talk to.
So "boulevard of broken dreams" fits very well.
The second music choice "Last resort" also fits well because
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in the second half of the movie, he is growing increasingly insane from loneliness and he is being self-destructive and reckless.
My instructor, who has been a working professional in the video and movie industry for many years, gave me an "A" on this trailer.
It may have not fit your personal tastes, and that's fine, but to an objective and trained industry professional, this was a great trailer.
If the good lord had intended us to go outside or have a social life, he wouldn't have invented the internet.
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