I think the screenies look rather "randomly"
If i must be honest.
It doenst mean if you use X10 that automatically your game looks super!
You still have to put time and effort in making your game look good,
even though you use X10.
But your game looks like entities have been placed randomly.
And a room with 50 enemies...Is kind of..yeah..dont know.
Also there is no story. Or is there?
Not trying to make you angry and i dont want to sound mean.
But it would be better if you try some games here on the forum.
Or play some commercial games...let them be your "reference".
Try to play with the lighting and level lay-outs.
And finally try to expand your level lay out/lighting(entity)placement skills.
I think you can do much more better than this.
(again, dont want to sound mean)