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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Unit 54 X10

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i love zombies
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Posted: 7th Oct 2008 19:35 Edited at: 7th Oct 2008 20:53
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At the Momment im working on a game that is a Action game with Elements of Horror!
So im just gonna write the Story Out for you

You have Been In Training For Cadets For One Day, Only 18, Your Skills Are So Smooth You Are Quickly Taken, And Put In Unit 54, a Unit That Deals With Crisis That No Millatary Operation Team are allowed To Handle, The Unit Puts You On a Course, With Lots Of Robots, You Take Them Down, with ease, And Faster Than Any Man Could, You are Taken Straight into the Unit 54 operations, Your First Mission, To Kill The Person, Wont Be your last to kill that man.
The Website is still underway See it at www.freewebs.com/unit54
Screen SHot one attached (This is a old Screeny the Fire Glitch HAs been Fixed !)

get a shotgun and fire it in the back of your mouth!

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Butt monkey
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Posted: 7th Oct 2008 20:35
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How the heck do you manage to write in caps all the time...

Firstly the story needs work. It's very basic with minimal details. 14 years old? No. I don't think you can even get a job at that age let alone join the military.

The screen looks a bit poor. It's tiny and doesn't show much. Get some better screens.
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Posted: 7th Oct 2008 20:51
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Ok ill work on it, just a update, i manged to make hands for the Colt45 it uses Model pack 6's hand texture.

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get a shotgun and fire it in the back of your mouth!

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Screen 3

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Looks OK, but please make the screens bigger.
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Posted: 11th Oct 2008 00:43 Edited at: 11th Oct 2008 14:26
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Well i manged to make a slow motionish thing you get when you are likely to go
And by the way the slow motionish thingy, how i did it, tis a secret (Taps nose )

get a shotgun and fire it in the back of your mouth!
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errr
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