@Frankie:
Your post caused the most annoyanc for me because, in reality, you had nothing to say at all. It wasn't even YOUR opinion. You simply said "I agree".... and that doesn't really mean much, nor does it constitute a need for a post. He asked for crit, not a show of hands.
Quote: "EDIT - nvm"
Smart choice.
@game maker & Deathead:
Harsh is harsh, whether constructive or not.
Saying "garbage" is much harsher than saying "it needs work". They both get the point across and one is less degrading than the other. If you choose to go the harsher route, I'll remember it and go the harsher route when criting your work because I believe in the golden rule stating that others want to be treated the way they treat everyone else.
@game maker:
Cry me a river and get over it. It's thoughts like yours that keep the world from moving forward. To think that you need to treat EVERYONE like crap just because you were treated like crap doesn't make progress to a better place. Vengeance on people who did you no injustice is pretty despicable, if you ask me.
@MasterXMP:
Showing initiative to make a game is a good start. Posting up your progress and asking for ways to improve is an even better start.
Listen to people here (even the mean people) who show constructive criticism and you're sure to get going on the right track. Adding lights to your level will definitally add to the atmosphere of your game, but be careful with an open roof since having a dark level when there should be ambient light doesn't make a whole lot of sense.
IMHO, custom media is
optional. You can do many great things with stock media, I've seen it done before so I know.
Good start, but keep at it!
The one and only,
Those who live in the past, are destined to insanity. Those who live only for the future, will be slaves to their ambitions.
Those who live in the moment... only they, are truly happy.