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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Hotel Escape

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Caboose 101
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Posted: 8th Nov 2008 21:50
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This is my second game and will be for free when I finish it. I am still in production of adding stuff in level one.

Story:
You wake up after a long nights sleep in a hotel to find a dead person on your bed. As you freak out, you go to your neighbor's room and find an axe. Somehow overnight the hallway was boarded up so you break the board. You go into the right room and find... A ZOMBIE! You realize what happened and you must escape, or be infected.

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Download Non-Complete Demo:
http://files.filefront.com/Hotel+Escaperar/;12284474;/fileinfo.html

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I did this in my free time when I was bored and didn't really add some stuff. I am still in progress of it right now. How do you think it is currently?

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If you could improve the story for me that be great! Any help is always needed.

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Walk carefully among the dead.... for among those who die are those who live....

Caboose

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Caboose 101
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Screenshot Two:

Walk carefully among the dead.... for among those who die are those who live....

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Caboose 101
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And Three:

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CoffeeGrunt
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Posted: 8th Nov 2008 22:11
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Hmm....

Add lights, and some more entities, make sure they make sense where they are, e.g., those cafe tables don't belong on a flight of stairs. Also, those planks look too perfectly horizontal to have been nailed on.....

Good so far though.....

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thanks I am also adding an easter egg section. Though I tryed to make the planks diagnal on the board. They ended up glitched.

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Caboose 101
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Posted: 9th Nov 2008 00:27
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New Screenshot

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Posted: 9th Nov 2008 01:53
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Rooms are too bare, there's no lighting, and the enemies are dupliactes of each other....

Throw in some entities, like the WWII beds and such, give it some nice decor. Add in those fancy lights from the WWII stock, and light the place up. It's not scary without some atmospheric lighting....

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There actually is lighting, CG.

Yeah, the boards are too perfect, and not big enough. You wake up and find two weedy little planks across the door, what an issue. You should put a lot more planks across the door.

And yes, the enemies are all the same, mix 'em up a bit.


http://gunn3rgames.net/forum/index.php?referredby=19
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Quote: "There actually is lighting, CG."


Make it more obvious that there is then lol.....

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How will I mix up the planks and stuff? When I press 3 or something to make it diagnol, IT GLITCHED. I will put some surgeons, and doctors. I haven't finished the thing yet you know

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Posted: 9th Nov 2008 11:31
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Quote: "IT GLITCHED."


What do you mean?

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Posted: 10th Nov 2008 03:48 Edited at: 10th Nov 2008 03:49
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I mean, when I tested the game, the planks just came out of the pathway. I can't give screen, I will try to get one though.

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