Some C&C
- A simple story but its building a good enough motivation for the player and lets a lot of room for some logic behind the mysterious things (which I expect to happen
)
- nice setting, the entrance is very well designed (but I support the idea with trees around (afair Cosmic Prophets "Hell House" pack had some leafless trees)
- A detail: the switch could be operated from the other side of the wall so its better to place it somewhere else OR edit the player distance in the script.
Cant wait to see some more rooms
PS: since I am a native German speaker I would be more than glad to help you with those signs. Its p.e right that its spelled "G
efängnis" but this word is still wrong as it was not used for some small prison cells within a building.
Here are some common translations back from the 40ies German military:
Prison = Arrest
Mass = Messe
Storeroom = Magazin
Radio Room = Funkraum
Toilet = Latrine (now thats a hard one,isn't it?
)
Boiler Room = Heitzraum or Heizraum (depends on region)
Officers Mass = Kasino
Weapons Locker Room = Waffenkammer
Bathrooms = Duschen
sleeping Quarters = Quartiere
Kitchen = Küche
Clothing (plus Towels etc.) Store Room = Wäschekammer
IF you need more just let me know
In case you find my grammar and spelling weird ---> native German speaker ^^