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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / fallout of humanity...demo 1a

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Priske
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Posted: 25th Aug 2009 21:31 Edited at: 25th Aug 2009 21:33
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Okay here is my little review

Well first off the dialog is very sloppy and kind of random.
A good example of the above statement:

Is it true you have many information's to share with me?

or

You are kinda quit can we hang out later?

After asking this I found her saying she would like to have sex with me but I need to find my sister.
A. I didn't ask for sex, I asked to hang out.
B. I didn't even know I had a missing sister

I would suggest that you clean up the Dialog alot.

Second thing is the camera, I found my self looking through walls A LOT of the time. I also found I could hoover when I crouch XD

Lastly: the gun is very slow to respond, when I click I have to wait a few seconds before it actually shoots.

On the up side:

The Levels are well set up, could use more explanation for why I am there but the environments are nice.

The characters eye candy to say the least, very well done, art wise.

Lighting was good, the flashlight was a great tool and very helpful.


Over all, there is a lot to be fixed but it is a very good start!

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I thikn that the full game will explain you.


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Priske:thanks for comenting and playing As long for the dialog ehh i did this on perpuse whe are talking about 50 years after a nuclear war humans are living under ground with no laws no nothing...NO school how do expect them to be polite?Is it true you have many information's to share with me?------ehhhhh i got what are you trying to say but polite doesnt exaclty goes with post apocalypse......Everything you see is there for a reason i am dooing this for 6 months...Also this was a demo of the new 3rd person camera antyl now it is the best 3rd camera in fpsc...sooo i know it sucks but it is not finished yet....Metal Devil123 :thanks for your support
i really apreciate that you supported my game your name will be in the game credits...

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It will! Oh my god, thank you! You know. I just like this game that's all. Even thou it has some bugs, but you just need to step on those bugs and they are dead. Keep it up!


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Quote: "...sooo i know it sucks but it is not finished ye"


Sorry as you know Fenix Mod is having a new feature added (a BIG ONE) and it is hard to work on that and the third person camera so i promise once i finish up this new feature ill fix the third person up.

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Well saying: Is it true you have many information's to share with me?

Doesn't make any sense.

Something along the lines of: Is it true you can help me with a lot of things?

just an idea

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Posted: 26th Aug 2009 01:06 Edited at: 26th Aug 2009 01:08
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for some reason i dont get what you are saying but ok i will change this......By the way do you talked to the other guy?he says that helena can give many informations..

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Im going to guess that English isn't your 1st language?

Saying someone can give you information's doesn't make sense...

Someone can give you information. Would make much more sense

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No it is not.....but thanks for telling me that that was wrong...

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Quote: "the third person camera so i promise once i finish up this new feature ill fix the third person up.
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hey hokceykid i told you i will comercialize your mod...thanks men.

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No problem man

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Quote: "Even thou it has some bugs,"
yes i know i will fix them i am having a ligistic nightmare right now about how to make things like when someone ask to do something you do it and when you are back he gives you keys or helth or something and diferent text appears every time i go to him...and this kinda things require scripting thinking and it is hard to have to think hoqw to do something possible and the same time fixe bugs and th same time think about level design character design..Logikal combersations to lead you somewhere lighting .....blablabla you all know those things.....

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Keep comenting guys.......give your opinions on the sreenshots...

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i have some very bad news my pc doesnt work anymore 1:thw bootmgr was missing 2:i formated my pc 3:now when i turn it on it says sleep mod...anyway the good thing is that 2 days earlier i bukced up the whole fpsc folder and i still have everything i need for my game...i just dont know when i will fix my commputer...thanks for listenging....

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Well It's good to hear that you haven't lost any files! Taht would suck if you would have lost the whole game! Well, I hope you get your computer fixed! Good luck!


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Quote: "NO school how do expect them to be polite?"


It isn't that the people aren't polite, it's the fact that alot of the dialogue doesn't make sense
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Quote: "alot of the dialogue doesn't make sense "
yes i know it hard to make the dialogs the same time te huds and the same time make it logikal...and the same time to set up the level...

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Well my pc is now fine and fully working it fixed it self some how....i dont know how....but it is now working....

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Outstanding effort this really is.


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It's good that your comp is working. Oh, and I haven't seen the screens of the gameplay of teh girl. But this game seems very nice! How did you make the 3rd person guy shoot?


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:L any resemblence of names? Only that mine is a japanese warrior line (At least I think SikaSina is...meh).

Anyway, this looks great, but I won't try it as for some reason, my PC will never load FPSC games but loads mine fine . I guess I will have to upgrade to 64-bit from 1GB RAM to 8GB

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so many collision problems... anyway i would just stick with first person

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i would just stick with first person...that's you and for my game to make you feel the style and the mood it got to be in the 3rd person shouter..It makes the game allot different you dont feel the way i want you to...

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I would stick with 3rd person! New screenies look nice! How did you get that guy shooting? I have Fenix Mod's 3rd person, but I don't knwo how to get it to shoot. But awesome screenies!


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The layout looks quite nice, but the camera pitch is quite high, IMO, and over the shoulder cam would look better...

If I was ever given the opportunity to remove all the bad from the world, I wouldn't, because for there to be heroism, compassion and all that is good, there must also be all that is bad.
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Metal Devil123:give to the player the same gun the character o use....but players weapon should be transparent....
CoffeeGrunt:i am waiting for fenix mods 3rd person camera commands to do the shoulder cam as i said before...the game will have the 3rd person shoulder camera....

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Oh! I was thinking of that, but never tougth that you used that! LoL! But gotta try!


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THIS IS actually from the cut scenes....yesh

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That scene looks very good! I like it very mutch! I like that noise. Is it static or dynamic. Good job! Keep it up!


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the car is ruuning normaly....i filled the whole level with those kind of buldings and it was kinda hard to make it not to lag...the noise is dynamic but it is done in post production...i wont use the noise in the cut scene if i wont figure out how to add it in the game.

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You have a... Oh yeah! You have fenix mods 3rd person, forgot that! LoL!


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i thought everyobode knew that already//////

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6002 views celabrate.......yeah let's party woooohoooo....my game rules.,

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Woohoooo! Yes it does! I was saying about the lag. So I tought that you should get a mod, but then I tought that "Hey! He has fenix Mod's 3rd person, so he must have Fenix Mod".


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where is the download link?

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the game is not complete yet...i will upload a 3 level demo by tommorow.....

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i cant wait...

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ok news...i am thinking of making the game dependable from the player...certain actios that will triger a sertain story...i mean:
You must kill john:1 if you do kill him then the character that will show you they key to leave the jail will appear if you dont kill him some other guy will appear that will help you escape from tunnels...i know how compicated this will be but for i want the best for my game and i can achieve it so you vote.....yes or no?i need 10 votes....plz vote

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did you made all textures? It looks awesome.

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I vote yes! Nine times! LoL! Kidding! But still: Yes. That sounds cool! Need to get more people here...


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Quote: "did you made all textures? It looks awesome."
kinda yes i retextured almost everything......

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here some more screenshots...there are goin to be a big lack of media upload i am directing a movie now and i am quite
busy...but plz dont let the popularity of the game to fall...

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Looks great! I love those screenies! I like alll the screenies in here! Keep it up!


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Quote: "I like alll the screenies in here!"
Thank you i am shure you will like the whole game to..anyway i want use the complex story thing....didn't had many votes....how can i have 200 views per day and nobody voted?damn it......

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I'm wondering that too... I liek that there is other survivors making little group. The second last screenie reminds me of Half-Life 2 and Freedom Fighters! So grat job!


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actually it is inspired by Freedom Fighters and some things from the game are inspired from Freedom Fighters and fallout together and sillent hill:the fog....

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I can see that! Just reminded of me about the city 17 scenes. Somehow. And that other place. Where is that crazy church guy. Who throws you the gun! And I never tought of putting plans into a barrel! Wow! Gotta do that the nexxt time.


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Quote: "Where is that crazy church guy. Who throws you the gun"
he is in some other secret place.... you'll see

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fnt077We_eo ThE NeW tRaiLer.....

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