Welcome Jack.
Quote: "i might upload a demo of the game or i might put it on hold"
Working for ones own interest and gains from doing so, is a good place to start.
Searching for public opinion, uploading a jpeg picture (miscrosoft paint can do this for you, there are many others.) is required.
Good luck to you, work with the story, plan scenes to flow.
Ask yourself why do I have the player trapped, what/who put him there? if it's the horrors then I guess you have something a little different.
And this someone, how did they get past the horrors? or are they not who they may be. You never know what may evolve if you work with it a bit more, get your own style going.
I'll check back to see when you up a .jpeg ,hoping you do so before a lock or something. Enjoy building.
"in videogames you try to get the best graphics with the least amount of processing." -Ingolme
"The more skill you acquire, the less you have to use it." SS