Quote: "keep in mind the world has ended, but I do need to change the segments.
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So all walls suddenly become brick when the world ends?
Quote: "it is supossed to look empty. it is meant to give you the feel that everyone has died out, and you have nothing left, not even the basics of life. the first screen is the living room, second is on top of the building, third is in the kitchen.
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So where have all the objects gone? They don't just magically disappear when everyone dies. I think you've taken the "emptyness" to the extreme. Rooms shouldn't be completely void of objects.
You want to creat a dark and dingy atmosphere but at the moment I'm not feeling it. It's too light and the rooms are too big and square. Lower your ambience, create a very light fog, find some trashy entities - (rubbish/broken glass/rubble) and decorate the environment.
In the second shot your boundary is too obvious, download the free model pack
model pack 36 and use the buildings in it to create a more realistic street. Also, if the world had suddenly died out, the streets would be littered with all sorts of junk - old cars, rusting benches, dead trees etc.
You could make a very atmospheric game if you just put more time into decorating it. At the moment it just looks bland.
