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FPSC Classic Models and Media / WW2 Karabiner 98 Krus for sale!

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General Jackson
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Posted: 27th Nov 2009 23:33 Edited at: 29th Nov 2009 06:12
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Hi, all, I have finally finished after many hours of work the first Karabiner 98 krus for FPSC!
I spent at least 8 hours on perfecting this, it is my best work of art so far!
You can buy it on my website for only $3.00!!!!!!
It is FULLY animated with mp6 hands, comes with weapon and ammo pickups and a vweap for the enemies!
Also has a High-quality 1024x1024 texture map!
Purchasers will generally recieve their order in 8 hours or less!
Usually about 2!



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henry ham
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 00:08
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nice job mate good luck with this

cheers henry

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GameRetardo
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 00:12
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looks really nice GJ but you should make the texture a bit more dark, it's too bright at the moment. Anyway, you did a great job

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General Jackson
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 02:14
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Thanks for the comments
Made the texture darker, see first post.

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PW Productions
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 03:28
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Ah, the new texture looks much better, GJ Can we see a video I'm eager to see, too, as you know

Nice work, can't wait to trade

PWP

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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 10:44
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Could you please post a video of it? Also, the bolt is meant to be on the other side.

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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 11:09
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Its nice but even EAI doesnt charge 5 bucks for his finest weapons.Id give it a price of 3 bucks The texture looks pretty good.

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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 11:51
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nice GJ, new texture looks much better

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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 12:09
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nice mesh, altough i dont like the texture



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Cyborg ART
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 12:57
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Looks great!
But what does krus stand for? As I remember it should be Kurz (short in german)

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Crazy Cam10
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 14:02
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Yup, your right cyborg
Karabiner 98 Kurz
^^ Real name

OT: Really..REALLY good model. Texture looks a bit brand new
But, very good. Might buy it if i can get paypal to work XD

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General Jackson
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 17:02 Edited at: 28th Nov 2009 17:04
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Wow! didnt know it would be so liked!
But your right, I will put it at 3 dollars.
Also Mgarand what do you dislike?


{edit} I'll see about a video a little later

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Aaagreen
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 17:03
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It doesn't have enough detail, I think he means.

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General Jackson
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 17:08
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Hmm, maybe your right, I'll add some bolts from the referencfe pictures, somehow I left them out when I was texturing.

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NICE!!!!! HOW DO YOU MAKE MODELS LIKE THAT???

What is fragmotion?

We have got our eyes on the prize.
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General Jackson
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 19:31
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Quote: "NICE!!!!! HOW DO YOU MAKE MODELS LIKE THAT???"

Thanks, man, it just takes a lot of practice
And Fragmotion is a program where you can animate and rig your models, it is very handy

Heres a vid guys, sorry for the low quality, but I had to compress it to fit it here

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PW Productions
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 20:46
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NICE! Love the model! The animations are a bit jerky, yet I understand how hard it is to make things like this, so best of luck to you, GJ

Cheers

PWP

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General Jackson
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 20:48
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They arent Jerky its just that fraps slows things down.
The framerate is only about 17.
Glad you like it though!

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PW Productions
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 20:50
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Oh, you're using Fraps

But yes, good work! Looks very nice! Rigged to EAI hands, it'd look cool, too.

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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 21:28
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Looks good Interesting left handed bolt. You might wanna rub some dirt on the texture, pretty clen for combat.

If your not on the edge your taking up to much room!!!!!!!
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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 21:30
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Model looks good but the texture needs alot of work.

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I don't like the texture. It seems very washed out and low-detail. As for the animation, I would use the left hand for the bolt instead of the right. When the bolt is on the left side of the gun, its usually more convenient to use the left hand. As the model itself, it looks fantastic.

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Posted: 28th Nov 2009 22:50 Edited at: 28th Nov 2009 22:51
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@Coach Shogun 20 I see your point but as far as I know this was a right hand rifle only. Also you don't just twist the bolt, it must be pulled back to extract the old cartridge, and pushed forward to chamber the new cartridge. I like the model but If I'm paying I want more, out of it.

If your not on the edge your taking up to much room!!!!!!!
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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 01:05
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Heltor I agree, I hadnt thought of that.
I will add that and all who have purchased this already will get a free update.
As for the washed out texture, the quality of the video is low, as already stated.

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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 05:28
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When you use FRAPS, set it to record at 1/2 size. It will be less choppy that way.

My advice would be to spend another 8-16 hours on it because it looks like a good start but just needs some more lovin'. You're going in the right direction though and once you convert it to proper right-handedness you'll be on the right road.

Quote: "But your right, I will put it at 3 dollars."


Charge what you like for it! I only sell things so cheap because because I'm sort of a doofus. If the dollar keeps dropping I'll have to smarten up though.

Best of luck with this. There's a thirst for WWII guns out there, so if you keep it up and keep improving there should be good rewards at the end of the line.
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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 06:16
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Update!!
Check the first post!
I made the texture much better!
It took me about three hours

Tomorrow I am going to see about reanimating it.

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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 10:26
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You should check some metal tutorials and make some realistic metal,add some scratches to it.Otherwise it looks great so far.

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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 12:01
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That looks a HELL of alot better
Great job

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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 15:48
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Ok, will do.
I made that wood completely from scratch froma tutorial.
I'm glad the wood looks right

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Looks good for a stat.
Make the animations slower and the textures more detailed still look a bit stretched.
I think u used something from the mas36's bullet texture.
Is that legal?
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 18:15
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The new texture looks better, but you can do even better
First, the woodtexture is vertical. It should be horizontal.
Like this:


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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 19:43
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Ace: no, I did not use anything from any other texture.
The bullets texture is from a picture of a bullet from my gun.
And the wood texture, I dont see why it should matter whether its vertical or horizontal.
I'm not redoing it unless someone can point out a good reason why it should be horizontal

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Because it would look better, surely that's reason enough?

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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 20:09
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How would it look better?

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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 20:19 Edited at: 29th Nov 2009 20:21
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Quote: "How would it look better?"


The grain pattern running along the length of the stock looks more natural than repeating rings down the wood. Manufacturers don't cut against the grain. It would make the gun look better, and the more time and work you put into your product, the more customers will apprecite it

http://files.sharenator.com/m1carbine_pfc_modelgun_wwii_WW2_GUNS-s480x360-14501-580.jpg
http://historydocumented.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2009/03/m1carbine.jpg
http://necropimp.home.insightbb.com/universal_m1_carbine.jpg
http://guidesmedia.teamxbox.com/guides/773087/jolie_molie/wpn_garand.jpg

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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 20:21
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FIne i'll redo it.
Its just I've done it about 6 times, and then someone points it out after I've done the best yet

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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 20:22 Edited at: 29th Nov 2009 20:24
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Because if the wood is going vertical that means whoever made it carved/whittled/ or whatever against the grain. This would make the job much much harder and much much longer. Thus wasted effort and wasted time making the money made off of selling the gun lose alot of its value. Its highly impractical to have it like that and I seriously doubt one exists like it. There ya go

EDIT: NOooooo Kraven beat me to it. Drat.

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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 20:28
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A mod may lock this thread since I have to practrically redo the whole thing.
I'll start another when I'm finished with the redo

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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 20:29 Edited at: 29th Nov 2009 20:52
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EDIT: Nevermind then.

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yeah you dont need to start all over just for the mapping.
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 23:11
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Quote: "Charge what you like for it! I only sell things so cheap because because I'm sort of a doofus."


I think it's a smart idea. Your items are at a perfect price; not too cheap so that you won't make money, yet not too expensive so that no one buys it. The prices give you a chance to get more buyers, and more money.

As for you, GJ, could you send me the texture, or at least a screenshot of the wood parts? I want to see if I could maybe help you improve it or give you some tips, maybe?. I love doing wood-ish textures Up to you.

Still can't wait to trade with you once your finished

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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 23:29
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I dont know, I would like it to be all done by me
I'm almost done with the reworked version, I think you guys will love it

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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 23:36 Edited at: 29th Nov 2009 23:39
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you said

I'm not redoing it unless someone can point out a good reason why it should be horizontal

i say this

sometimes it takes time to learn certin things, and redoing someting over and over and over agien makes you learn new ways of doing stuff. I KNOW ITS FRUSTRATING,but this is how we all learn my friend. I think it looks good myself but if other see it difrent then try your best to please the public becouse there the ones using the product right? so they want it a certin way then make it that way for them. I said my piece, but remember as time goes by you will know alot more so you can already do this stuff before people say anything.

good model, i like it

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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 23:37 Edited at: 29th Nov 2009 23:38
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I suggest looking at a gun, then understanding how it works before, trying to sell the model "of said gun", just a thought.
From my knowledge there was never a Karabiner 98 Kruz, made left handed, and anyone that has seen combat. Will see this model is needing a rebuild. no one that ever new about a gun would reach across the action, to extract a bolt, The model itself seems fine, but the animation should be scrapped, along with the texture.

My advise know a gun before you model it for sale. this may seem bad C+C but it's the truth.

If your not on the edge your taking up to much room!!!!!!!
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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 23:40
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DW: yes, thanks.
Heltor: Already done both (well, still working on the reanimation)
Get ready for it, I'm glad I did its much better.

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Show me Genral I wanna see it, I act hard on you because you have real potential. I say step in troop and show us all. I expect great things from you.

If your not on the edge your taking up to much room!!!!!!!
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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 23:45
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Thanks, Heltor, I'll show as soon as I'm done reanimating, but I want to show it in form of a video.
And yeah, dog me out so I can get better (no, I didnt say that like a smart mouth, I'm serious because I have found that it WORKS!)

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Glad you see my Point, SORRY to be so hard on you.

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General Jackson
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Posted: 29th Nov 2009 23:50
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No, I'm glad you were, its really helped

Now I'm going to go to my room and finish the animating.
Expect an update in about three hours

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GJ, looking good, I'm really excited about the update, will defenitely take a look.:

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