Sorry your browser is not supported!

You are using an outdated browser that does not support modern web technologies, in order to use this site please update to a new browser.

Browsers supported include Chrome, FireFox, Safari, Opera, Internet Explorer 10+ or Microsoft Edge.

FPSC Classic Models and Media / My first real attempt at making a real women for fpsc

Author
Message
Daniel wright 2311
User Banned
Posted: 17th Dec 2009 11:47
Link
ok, so i worked hard on her, took 5 days to complete. she is only 4000 pollies with one texture map. she will be fpsc ready tonight and i will post some screens of her in fpsc to.









Back to top
Profile
Nexar
15
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 6th Nov 2009
Location: Sweden, Mjölby
Posted: 17th Dec 2009 13:53
Link
Good job!

Back to top
Profile PM Email
GameRetardo
16
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 28th Apr 2009
Location: Where am I?
Posted: 17th Dec 2009 16:35
Link
looks really good but you should change the arms a bit. don't know what, maybe a bit closer to the body. Beside from that, VERY impressive

Game Freak
Back to top
Profile PM Email
French gui
21
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 11th May 2004
Location: France
Posted: 17th Dec 2009 18:01
Link
Yeah, nice model there, just work a bit her shoulders and err... the uv map on the... you know?
Back to top
Profile PM Website
Essal
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 15th Jan 2006
Location: inside your webcam, watching YOU.
Posted: 17th Dec 2009 18:46
Link
Very nice
Looking forward to seeing it inside FPSC

Back to top
Profile PM Email Website
heltor
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 3rd Oct 2007
Location: cyberspace
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 00:50
Link
I like, I need, I want, Can't wait for her release. You need to give yourself a pat on the back, Dan. Very nice work here.

If your not on the edge your taking up to much room!!!!!!!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
The Storyteller 01
16
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 11th May 2009
Location: On a silent hill in dead space
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 01:15 Edited at: 18th Dec 2009 01:21
Link
The arm-shoulder-neck conjunctions need some work to look anatomically correct.

But I am impressed with the jeans, its the best texture I've seen from you so far. You keep improving with every new release!

EDIT: she would actually still look very feminine if you modelled her some baggy cargo trousers in a greyish colour instead of a partially skin tight jeans. With a not too brightly single-coloured top she could then count as a civillian as well as military (if armed)

In case you find my grammar and spelling weird ---> native German speaker ^^
Back to top
Profile PM Email Website
xplosys
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 5th Jan 2006
Playing: FPSC Multiplayer Games
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 01:17
Link
Not too bad. If you like, I could provide you with some technical drawings?

I agree that she looks a little beefy on top, unless that's what you were going for. Her upper back, shoulders and neck remind me of Arnold Schwarzenegger. Oh, and the jeans should be painted on from the knees up (no wrinkles). At least that's how it is in my dreams.

I wish I could do a character that well. Maybe one day....

Brian.

Back to top
Profile PM
Spycrabz
16
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Aug 2008
Location: Lennox Head, Australia
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 02:34
Link
Why does she have no bellybutton?



Steam: mogbog123
Back to top
Profile PM Email
teamhalo
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 6th Nov 2005
Location: florida
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 03:42
Link
Your texturing has shown improvement, especially in the jeans.
Good work.

Come Listen to my free music!
Back to top
Profile PM Email Website
heltor
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 3rd Oct 2007
Location: cyberspace
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 04:12
Link
maybe her jeans are to tall to show a bellybutton, All people are different, why worry about such things, a fetish maybe. I like it myself.

If your not on the edge your taking up to much room!!!!!!!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
Conjured Entertainment
AGK Developer
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 12th Sep 2005
Location: Nirvana
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 05:17 Edited at: 18th Dec 2009 05:18
Link
Quote: "My first real attempt at making a real women for fpsc"

A real women?
So, she is moody and unpredictable?
Does that chic lift weights, because her neck muscles look big from behind like she has been dead lifting or something?
Maybe that is how she stretched her pants on her rear, from all the squatting.
Just kidding, but there is my constructive criticism anyway.

Nice work!

   Conjured Entertainment

 WARNING: Intense Madness
Back to top
Profile PM Website
Spycrabz
16
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 29th Aug 2008
Location: Lennox Head, Australia
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 05:45
Link
Quote: "maybe her jeans are to tall to show a bellybutton, All people are different, why worry about such things, a fetish maybe. I like it myself."


I just like to nitpick.



Steam: mogbog123
Back to top
Profile PM Email
heltor
17
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 3rd Oct 2007
Location: cyberspace
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 05:47
Link
Hey Conjured I lost your e-mail and I wanna talk. Please e mail me
Dan she has a beautiful texture, small issue with her shoulders, still great work

If your not on the edge your taking up to much room!!!!!!!
Back to top
Profile PM Email
MK83
FPSC Reloaded TGC Backer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 10th Jun 2006
Location: Greeneville, TN
Posted: 18th Dec 2009 16:00
Link
awesome, we need more females in fpsc.

mk83 Productions
Back to top
Profile PM
Conjured Entertainment
AGK Developer
19
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 12th Sep 2005
Location: Nirvana
Posted: 19th Dec 2009 02:22 Edited at: 19th Dec 2009 02:35
Link
Quote: "Hey Conjured I lost your e-mail and I wanna talk."

Okay Heltor, I'll send you one in a few minutes.
Just don't send any large attachments, because my inbox is almost full.

@Daniel
I was only joking around dude, and I meant no offense.
Just tried to add a little humor to the criticism.
She is much better than any human I have made, so I wasn't kidding when I said nice work.

@Heltor
Email Sent
Actually I sent two, because I didn't notice a dumb spelling error until after I had hit the send button.
Anyway, talk to you soon.

   Conjured Entertainment

 WARNING: Intense Madness
Back to top
Profile PM Website
The Master Dinasty
16
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 14th Sep 2008
Location: Valhalla
Posted: 19th Dec 2009 09:53
Link
Her neck makes her look like a reeeeeaaaaly strong woman might wanne change that....








-Massap2

Beacause massa is the master!
Staring blankly at the sun waiting for my time to come...
Back to top
Profile PM
Daniel wright 2311
User Banned
Posted: 19th Dec 2009 10:22
Link
thanks for all the sugestions guys, like i said though, this is my real first attemt to do a women, i did try another one before but it was one of my men meshes and did not look real good. so this one is modeled just from a womens photo and well, Im still learnig some things. we never stop learning, right,lol.

Back to top
Profile
MK83
FPSC Reloaded TGC Backer
18
Years of Service
User Offline
Joined: 10th Jun 2006
Location: Greeneville, TN
Posted: 4th Jan 2010 01:13
Link
don't let this one die. It is a good model. Are you finished with it yet?

mk83 Productions
Back to top
Profile PM
Daniel wright 2311
User Banned
Posted: 4th Jan 2010 03:59 Edited at: 4th Jan 2010 04:31
Link
well, she just will not look like I want her to, no matter what i try I can not get her shoulder to animate right, Im still working on her and will relise her when she animates the way im trying to make her.

Back to top
Profile
Back to top

Login to post a reply

Server time is: 2025-06-08 02:33:31
Your offset time is: 2025-06-08 02:33:31