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FPSC Classic Models and Media / My first model a simple ice cooler

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Zwarte Piet
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This is my first model, I want to know why it doesn't look right, it looks like a cartoon.

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Zwarte Piet
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Posted: 5th Jan 2010 00:07
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I had to wait to post ingame, sorry. Thank You

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OutdoorGamer
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Posted: 5th Jan 2010 03:36
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nice first model man
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Zwarte Piet
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Posted: 5th Jan 2010 04:50
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Thank You OutdoorGamer, I did many tutorials to get here, but it still looks cartoony to me.
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Posted: 5th Jan 2010 05:03
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It's hard to tell you how to make it look better because the picture is so small I really can't see the texture.

Brian.

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Kumi
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Not Bad Mate. Keep it up

-Kumi

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Zwarte Piet
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Posted: 5th Jan 2010 21:28 Edited at: 5th Jan 2010 22:42
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I did not know what size to make the picture xplosys, should I make it bigger?

Thank You Kumi, It was fun to make.

Edit- I have made normal maps for the cooler. I'm still unsure how they work, but I hope they help.

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heltor
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Posted: 6th Jan 2010 01:39
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This looks Ok son, I say just fine.

If your not on the edge your taking up to much room!!!!!!!
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Zwarte Piet
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Thank You heltor
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I think its real good for your first model, keep it up, In no time you will be making all kinds of cool stuff.

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Zwarte Piet
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I forgot to say the cooler is animated.
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Zwarte Piet
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"bump" I will be releasing a camping pack.
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Posted: 9th Jan 2010 03:20 Edited at: 9th Jan 2010 03:20
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That's pretty cool, but you might want to work on the model a bit, make it not so blocky, real ice coolers have curved edges.



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Zwarte Piet
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Thank You dolphin lover I'll try to round the edges more.
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ambideXter
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Posted: 23rd Feb 2010 07:03
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Like others said, pretty good for a first model, especially since it's also animated? Man i wouldn't start with an animated one, impressive.
And i saw your other camping models, you DID make great models shortly after.
Seems you have a neck for this. I want to start modeling soon, get Milkshape since it's cheap, Blender as a "back up" since it's free. Maybe i'll ask you a question if i really cannot find the answer in a tutorial or google it.
Since you're Dutch (i assume) it would make it a lot easier. But like i said, maybe, if i'm really stuck, and only if you wouldn't mind. Cheers m8

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Zwarte Piet
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I had a several lessons, I use my stepdads computer it has max.agian thanks for the bump.

"I would rather make a bad model, instead of pirate a great one" MY DAD
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Cosmic Prophet
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Nice work so far. keep at it!

I've developed a new philosophy... I only dread one day at a time.
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Zwarte Piet
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Thank You Comic Prophet, You are one of my modeling heros. I'm glad you like it.

"I would rather make a bad model, instead of pirate a great one" MY DAD
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