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you start off in the future. robots are now fully part of the army but humans are still in aswell. after a while the robots start going beserk one by one. soon all of them are self-aware. you get captured and have to fight your way out and to save the earth. however the robots are going to have to stop you before it's too late for them. at this point some of the robots are actualy on your side because of thier awareness. and thats all i got so far"
You should definitely reworks that. Not to be mean, but I've heard that story so many times before that I only need to read "robots are now fully part of..." to know where it's going. I don't have any tips on how to make that better because it will still most likely be your generic "robot wars" game.
On to the screens: they look good, but need more lighting. You should also get some more segments other than stock. If you're only planning to make this in the forums, you'll need other stuff. If you release it as commercial, then you could be fine as the other gamers will never have seen that before.
http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=166194&b=25
RADS, X10 Game. Still in Development as of 3/25/10