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Music & Sound FX / 'Forever I'll be Here' Original

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da power pwnerer
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Posted: 24th Apr 2010 06:11 Edited at: 24th Apr 2010 06:16
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Hello all. I was taking a little break from the forums here for no real reason in particular other than family and band issues.. however I'm going to try to once again be a regular here on the Music and SFX board and to kick things on, here is just a little, sort of repetitive I'll say that right now, orchestration made for a picture that I saw somewhere on the web. It inspired me to write a little something in a couple hours.

Comments/Criticism much appreciated

"To lead, you must first die in your mind. Let go of life, and embrace it!!!"

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Agent Joe
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Posted: 27th Apr 2010 17:58 Edited at: 27th Apr 2010 18:00
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The percussion part is a little too repetitive... but I like the Instrumentation. Good job.

Try things that you normally wouldn't... you might find the answer.
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da power pwnerer
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Posted: 27th Apr 2010 22:45
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Thanks a bunch Yeah the song is kinda repetitive in general but aah well

"To lead, you must first die in your mind. Let go of life, and embrace it!!!"
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Rudolpho
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Posted: 7th May 2010 11:05
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Nice sound. I can agree on the repetitive part. I would also have enjoyed a more melodical part; maybe a flute lead with a decrease in the timpani and strings hardness would fit well?
Others than that it has a great progression and instrumentation; good mixing work as well

Oh, and welcome back. I find I'm not around here as much as before either; should really try to fix that.

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Lucifer
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Posted: 7th May 2010 20:59
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The percussion is at full-on-action mode all the way through the song, sometimes it goes down a little but i felt it was a little too much, the song needed the quiet part, where maybe you have fewer instruments playing.

Other than that the song is good, but i think it could go from being good to great if you fix the percussion thing

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