Quote: "It's pretty much my first go of making a segment anyway"
You're still going to get criticism, whether you like it or not
Now, time for mine: Looks stretched, and the wall isn't seamless. Add more variation, have fun with it. Take a look at what I did real quick to your segment (note that I didn't focus on the flow of the texture at all. What I mean by this is that it's seamless, but it still doesn't look good when used repetively, I just did it for a quick example

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See what I mean? Add more variation, and work on getting it seamless
Cheers
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