There's a lot writer errors and holes in your story.
Let me show you what:
Quote: "After the war broke out we were losing lives fast,"
A war has been started between who and why?
Quote: "we needed to substitute those lost lives with something"
The "those" isn't needed in this sentence.
Quote: "The idea was to liberate the dead"
Liberate the dead?
Where they slaves before?
It should be,raise the dead.Besides,that doesn't sound like a good idea in anyway.And if were talking about zombies here,then whats that thing in the 6th picture?
Quote: "That plan backfire and the super soldiers were killing friendlys"
The plan has backfired
and the "
Super soldiers" started
So yeah,for the sake of people taking you seriously,I suggest you fix your story accordingly.
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