Seens like a very Blue Dawn to me

I suggest toning down the blue a bit.
Also the rules are:
Quote: "REQUIRED:
1.) Name of Game; this can be substituted by a Title Graphic (the Game name must be in the graphic). The graphic should be reasonable in size.
2.) Developer name.
3.) Which FPSCreator you are using: must be in your thread's title as either [x9] or [x10].
4.) Storyline and/or description.
5.) No limit on screenshots in the initial post; but you MUST have at least one (in-game only; thumbnails are acceptable) in your INITIAL post. The mandatory image MUST be either viewable in the post itself, without having to click a link; or available by clicking on the attachment button. Screenshots should not exceed 800x600 pixels; no one wants to have to scroll to see your image. You may link to a larger image however.
OPTIONAL:
6.) Link(s) to additional images.
7.) Website and/or videos...must be click-able.
8.) Demo download link...must be click-able.
9.) Credits.
10.) Contact Info."
But it's nice to see that you atleast got the most important thing, that eveyone else seems to miss when making threads... screenshots.
The screens are very dark thou, especially the second.