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Toilet Freak
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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 03:47 Edited at: 13th Oct 2003 06:44
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these are screenies of my model that I've been working on for about a week(hour or 2 a day), 2995 polys(yeah, I tried to keep it low), I need crits before I start rigging her and texturing her...

edit:pics killed

pls critic on whatever you think looks odd about it, and, pls start a vote thingy for wether you want the bow on or off her?(I cant decide, the bow might give me the #$%^$ when rigging...

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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 03:56 Edited at: 5th Oct 2003 03:59
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Leave the bow on.

1 vote yes
0 votes no

(Lemme know if you want the picture taken down TF.)


Looks pretty good. You obviously know the polycount could be reduced to maybe 2500.(It looks like a lot of the polygons are going to rounding the shirt and the hair.)

The knees also look a little low on her leg.(Maybe it's just me)
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/3.jpg
(this screenshot is where I'm getting that from.)

Looks very good, that's about all I can say. Overall you used polygons fairly weel. (I love the hair and the anime look.)



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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 04:06
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actually, the head itself takes about 1200 polys, I need to clean up abit, if anyones wondering why theres no face, it's because it isn't texured yet...

is it just me or is there only 2 pics shown(I posted 6)

if it don't work try these on your browser

http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/1.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/2.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/3.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/4.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/5.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/6.jpg

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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 04:08
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Yea, it wasn't working on my browser, so I'll just leave that screenshot up, unless you want it down.

If you took the bow off, I bet the polycount would go down 3-4 hundred, am I right? I still think it should be left on, despite the polycount for it adds more depth to the character.



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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 04:23
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I'm thinking the polycount could use some reducing. Some Seriour reducing my friend. The texture can cover the rest.

It appears to be pretty spiffy. Very Spiffy give us a wireframe and we'll see what we can do!

Keep us posted.

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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 06:43 Edited at: 13th Oct 2003 06:45
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heres a wireframe view

edit:pics killed

(what do you mean by spiffy? I had to take out the dictionary, lol, anyway, I don't intend on selling it)

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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 06:53
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Spiffy as in Neato,radicial,cool,sweet,tight,nice,awesome,well done.

I think that's what he meant.



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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 06:57
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anyone know why the pics aren't showing?

(spiffy wasn't in dictionary, I just took spiff as the one)
^_^

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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 07:03
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It's not showing because freewebs doesn't allow hotlinking of images.

(Lemme know if you me to take down the screenshots)




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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 07:03
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piece of tird, won't work, just copy paste these onto your browser

http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/1.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/2.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/3.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/4.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/5.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/6.jpg
http://www.freewebs.com/toiletfreak/7.jpg

sorry guys/gals, I tried editing didn't help, someone else could try(that would be good-the URLS up there^^)

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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 07:07
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they don't? damn, gonna haveto find another(sugestions pls)...

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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 07:09
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Request one, like I have for free here.
http://www.dbpcommunity.com/
Just go to the subdomain bar, and send an e-mail to Jimmy and get free and unlimited of everything.(for now at least)

We should really find and sticky thta dbpcommunity post.



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Posted: 5th Oct 2003 07:19
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ok I got most/all of them working now(I think/hope)YAY!, gonna try to upload to a diferent webhost(that db one)

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Posted: 6th Oct 2003 09:13
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I got the poly count to 2800, with a small sacrifice, but the bows still there...kill the bow and i get about 2500/2600 polys...

keep those crits coming...I moded the knee slightly(bearly noticable), get more screens when I get a new webhost started..

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Posted: 6th Oct 2003 12:36
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I'm waiting for more crits(based on those pics anyway)... I hate going back to fix stuff up.

if you can't think of anything to crit(^_^thats good), then please add to the bow vote, so far only 1 vote, need more. even a half empty post with a vote is better then none...(note: i was looking at the views counter, and it looked high for the amount of feedback I'm getting.)

not meant to sound bad/evil or anything, just that I'm going to be texturing her very very soon(as soon as I reduce the polys to the absolute min with an acceptable amount of quality and with a good amout for smooth rigging)

I got a question(hopefully, won't drift off subject-get a brief response hopefully), what exporter is there for 3ds max 5.1 that supports boning/rigging (aka, mesh deformations)

My friend said something about a quake 3 model format exporter from planetquake.com, but I can't remember the format extension for it(something like md3 or something), anyway, theres ages to go to the exporting stage, but it's good to have it beforehand, in case something screws up...

keep those feedback coming pls...^_^

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She looks to be bit out human proportions ...something with arms and legs not right I think. Also you need to work more on arms and legs shape, they are somehove simple may be.

Otherwise not bad. To model human body is allways dificult.
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Posted: 14th Oct 2003 05:14
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I got a subdomain for db comunity... what was the uploading site thingy?(the one that the guy made) I can't remember the URL, and my email is buggered.

I got the poly count down to 2448 polys, and a textured face(still working on it, looks really crude), screenys uploading when I find out the uploading url...

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