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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / [X9] Beyond Paranormal 2

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charger bandit
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Posted: 22nd May 2011 10:35 Edited at: 24th May 2011 18:19
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Beyond Paranormal 2


Developer: chargerbandit

Storyline:
The story goes parallel to Beyond Paranormal 1. You play as a horror movie fanatic caretaker in a company. You come to work your nightshift,but weridly there is no security guard. Not minding that,you go to inside to work your shift because you are already late...
[story will be updated later]

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More screens to come.

Need good constructive criticizm,I won't even read the comments like "Looks cool" and "Good game,waiting for demo" OR "There is not enough to comment"(I will be reporting these in the future)...


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xhogan89x
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Posted: 22nd May 2011 10:36
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Good game,waiting for demo!!!!
XD uhm for now with these 2 screen we cannot say too much for you... in future when the u post other screen...
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bobochobo
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Posted: 22nd May 2011 12:18
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As hogan said, theres not a great deal anyone can say on two screens and 2 lines of story.

All browsers should come with compulsory spell checks.

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PekelaarSFX
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Posted: 22nd May 2011 15:07
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Lighting is good, And I love the grimmy look.
But, as commented before, there isn't much to Criticize.
If your not to busy, please upload some more screens

PekelaarSFX - Storywriter & Audio Designer.
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Gencheff
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Those doors look out of place.The door trim(?) on the first screen is pitch black and the door style itself doesn't fit in.


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DarkJames
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...Well, as above, there's not much to it, I do like the Blueish Ambient, and the custom models, the door would need an overhaul tough.

i do like that you are using my Parking Lot Segs.

Keep it up!.

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Metal Devil123
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Posted: 23rd May 2011 20:39 Edited at: 24th May 2011 16:13
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I agree with Dark James. And my jaw dropped when I saw the title... I loved the first one!

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Payam
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Do not release the demo before you know the peoples idea.
Here are 2 screens from 2 corridor and it's nothing special about a game.
First show us some more screens then we say the designing problems and ideas.
After fixing them release a demo.

Have our guns was a mistake!!!

I am PaYaM
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charger bandit
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Posted: 24th May 2011 18:17 Edited at: 24th May 2011 21:52
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Thanks to Gencheff,Metal Devil and Dark James for actually commenting on the screens. More to come.


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Metal Devil123
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Posted: 24th May 2011 19:23
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Maby it's becouse I'm blind or something, but I jsut saw that there's a room under the pipes. Nice. Will you be roaming there later in the level? I, for some weird reason, love when game designers do this thing, where you go through an area you saw before. I don't know what it is, but I just love it.

But one thing I noticed, that hasn't been said: The lights on the wall look like they're off. Maby apply an illuminationmap on them? I like the word apply. Makes me sound sophisticated (alhto I might have spelled sophisticated wrong XD)

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charger bandit
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Yes,thanks for noticing. That area is a parking lot underneath,I guess you won't be exploring it,more for the show. Also,I am working on some illumination maps. Heres a reward for ya,room in progress,it's not much but it shows my new ceiling lights with illumination maps.


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Metal Devil123
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Looks nice. But I would propably increase the light's range and if necessary after that, I would maby make the hexcode a bit darker? But experiment with it and when you come to something that you really like, then show us what you end up with Looking good, keep it up!

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Payam
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Quote: "Are you guys stupid or something?"


If you talk like this in a community then no one will comment on your posts.

I think you have to fix your behavior before starting game designing.
And remember when your WIP game has made even less than 1% do not start a new thread.Because you have to show us very very very low detailed corridors which gets under 5 minutes for me to make.
You have about nothing to show then do not show.

Have our guns was a mistake!!!

I am PaYaM
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bruce3371
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Posted: 24th May 2011 21:57 Edited at: 24th May 2011 21:59
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Quote: "I, for some weird reason, love when game designers do this thing, where you go through an area you saw before. "


You're not the only one, I like this as well. I thought Aliens vs Predator (the 2000 Classic version) did this particularly well.

As for the game itself, I like the lighting so far, and I don't care that there isn't a lot of screenshots, I like being teased lol

[edit]Just seen your ceiling light screenshot; I do like it when people using lights that actually look like they're giving out light [/edit]

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nice screens
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how to make a good story line
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