This will get locked if you don't actually post a screenshot in the post.
1. Go to Imageshack.us and create an account
2. Upload your pictures to imageshack and copy the direct link
3. Come back to here and edit your post, click image and paste in the DIRECT LINK
4. Your images should now appear in your post.
EDIT - Your images should also be in a JPG format, not BMP...
Also, from the picture you have a lot of work to do. You have some random green lights in there for no reason. Follow this tutorial on how to fix your lighting problems,
http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=186371&b=21
Good Luck!
-Josh
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