thanks this is great I will address everything! As for the story that is currently being worked on, and I can't say very much at this point in time; but I might end up making this a series of games. The story I have in mind might fit for multiple games we shall see.
I do plan on adding a pretty good story to the game, its just a matter of finishing that and figuring out all the different possible ways to tell that story through FPS creator.
Just last night I got a freind on board to help me out, and he started just giving one idea after another.
So all in all what I am saying is this is probably more of an alpha right now, and that I do have alot left to work on.
Thanks again for ther critiques. They will help me out alot! Thanks