Sounds ok to me, but it sounds just like fruity loops. I'm no musician, but with FL I always experiment with sounds first, like add reverb, a little echo - usually just trying to make things sound unique. FL comes into it's own when you add in a bass line I think - maybe add some more tracks and fiddle with those knobs, the more advanced stuff you experiment with, the more you learn about what it all does, and your ideas will be more elaborate and unique. It's the only way to define your own style, just keep at it and try something new each time you use FL.

I am the one who knocks...
