Good to see you trying to push this to completion.
I hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism. I think the video needs to be tidied up a little, remember this is your first impression to prospective investors...
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Live images need to be brighter and in focus. Get as much light on them as possible when you record. You can reduce the brightness post -processing, but lightening it reduces quality and increases graininess.
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Stabilise the camera and check your backgrounds. Patio doors and other distractions need to go
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Stabilise the mobile device, even if you have to clamp your arm out of shot
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Add a background behind the screen images, rather than plain black.
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Brand the video, start with a logo and finish with a logo.
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I know it is a game, but I don't get much else from the video. Tell me about how simple it is to play but difficult to master, progression, rewards, uniqueness
Good luck with it, this is a game that deserves to succeed.
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