Well, with my new additions between asterisks, and one comment about one of your later lines. I've just started doing some Voice Over for a little game I'm making, and I know it can be hard to not write lines that sound weak. Also, getting the audio sounding right is hard too! (For me, you may have more success!)
START
Here we go
hi dude !
let's rock baby
try to impress me
*** Let's get started! ***
*** Show me what you got! ***
BOARD IS LOCKED
damn!
help me!
ouch!
move, move !
*** Denied! ***
*** Come on! ***
*** Not yet! ***
*** Awwww! ***
NEXT LEVEL
you rule
gonna be harder
*** Ok, try this! ***
*** You can do better than that! ***
*** Oh, think you can beat me? ***
*** Here's another one for ya! ***
*** And if you liked that one... ***
*** You make it look easy! ***
GAME OVER
Shame
(laughting)
You may try another game
*** Try again ***
*** Better luck next time ***
*** Oooh, so close! ***
*** Failure suits you. ***
*** You can do better! ***
NEW HISCORE
I love you
This is State of the art
you're my baby
(you're a neurotic, don't you ?) - not quite correct English, directly it would be more like "You're a neurotic, aren't you?" (no, it doesn't make sense, really, it just works
)
*** Attention seeker, eh? ***
*** Impressive, most impressive. ***
*** I'm going to remember that! ***