Rick 123,
I did'nt download your game because the server was too slow, however I'm sure it had some redeeming qualities, unlike the other jerks who posted the comments before me.
Keep working on it. I don't know of anyone who has shown a decent finished product on this forum yet. That's because it takes a team of writers, coders, and graphic artists a year or more to develop a decent game, and a top notch one can take years.
We are all just doing this in our spare time for the love of it, and most of us (if not all...it's hard to separate the truth from the bull around here) are learning as we go along.
Good luck and don't give up.
Crazy Grandpa