perhaps that story isnt really his own and he just copied and pasted it from somewhere else. That could explain why he can not spell properly in his later posts...
OR MAYBE HE REALIZED HE MADE A BAD FIRST IMPRESSION AND PUT ON THE POOR LANGAUGE ACT TO COVER UP HIS MISTAKE. I DONT KNOW???
the story, lets see...
Quote: "You wake up in your bed. You see the light is not on out side. You jump into you sliper and go outside. You see no one round and it is very cold. You pass out."
right lets see of course one would wake up in a bed (unless you went sleep walking and you wake up in a tree. You jump into a slipper, must be an awfully larger slipper to fit a fully grown man in it. Just because it is cold you pass out, thats strange???
Quote: "
You wake up in a cold metal room. You dont know where you are. You feel pain. You cant remember wht happened."
erm, yes you do know where you are YOU JUST SAID YOU WERE IN A LARGE COLD METAL ROOM (carefull you dont pass out again)
Quote: "
You later hear sounds outside. Language you do not know. A creature walks in with a suit on. It drags you to a new room and throws you in.
"
you here sounds well you are obviously not deaf. A creature with a suit on? Yes...a bit strange.
Quote: "You pass out. You awake to find your self in a room with some vents. You decide to get out.............."
HOW MANY TIMES CAN YOU PASS OUT IN ONE INSTANT????????
For goodness sake i hope you never become an author or a TV writer, sorry but that is the worst story i have ever heard???