Quote: "Tell me what you think!"
You put that, and expect a response of some sort. You wrote this down months in advance? Ok so that is more than I expected. How did you write this down? There is a sabre fight, I run up the stairs, I raise my arm. What did you write down? Did you write....
I raise my arm in triumph!!!
That was not raised in triumph. It was raised because you had to raise it for the script. You could tell.
Exactly how you want it?
I don't think it is exactly how you originally saw it in your head.
Quote: "there's a difference between constructive criticism, and just criticism..."
This is constructive............
Quote: "There are no second takes, no attempts to act. Running up the stairs even needs more work than that. Raising the arm is not right, too wobbly. If you want to impress people you need to work on getting the look right."
Constructive means to aid, and my words are aiding.
Quote: "If I wanted to make a movie to impress someone, there are TONS of things I would Do differently."
Well what's the point of asking what people think then? You didn't want to impress anyone, so their response should be...
"I am not impressed."
