Tamrilve (spelled Tamriel)...and nord...and haedra...those names are from The Elder Scrolls series...all of them...
The plot...it also seems almost exactly the same as in Oblivion (with the exception of Emperor's murder)
So uhh, you're going to make...an Oblivion ripoff?
WTF?!
Not very orginal, I must say. You just copied the plot from Oblivion and even kept the same names for races and places.
And the HUD isn't nice-looking either. It looks like it's been drawn in one minute with Paint. The sword doesn't look like a sword. It's not sharp at all, and you should really improve the edges of it.
The crown is weirdly shaped, and again, not as sharp as it should be.
However, if you *DO* manage to get some kind of magic system and bows to the game, then it sounds great...but why do all that with FPS Creator? FPS Creator is, logically, intended for making FPS games, not RPGs.
EDIT: Rideable dragons?
EDIT (2): In-game screenshots? Demos? Trailers?