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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / [LOCKED] Please tell me ideas for my horror game Death By Dawn

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W H I S P E R
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Posted: 1st May 2006 14:37
Please help me out on my game i realy need ideas, it is a horror base game going through WW2 and Sci-Fi i have attached a pic i ade for my game - Please rate it
Thanks,
Kyle

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Tom0001
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Posted: 1st May 2006 14:43 Edited at: 1st May 2006 16:03
A little bright and hard to read the words. Also, the colours don't seem to blend in very well. Try another combination of red shades.

Tom

EDIT: Why do you ask us what we think about that and how it could be improved then post another version of it saying it is the final logo?

Tom

K Jah
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Posted: 1st May 2006 17:21 Edited at: 1st May 2006 17:25
Quote: "Why do you ask us what we think about that and how it could be improved then post another version of it saying it is the final logo?"
What he really wanted to add was - "because it sucks and looks bloody awful!"
N.B that's my opinion above and may not actually be Tom0001's opinion.

Quote: "No1 dies a virgin coz life f**s us all"
lol, there's a star missing.

EDIT: This isn't supposed to be a flame, i'm just agreeing with Tom0001 and pointing out a star mistake. No offence intended.

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Posted: 2nd May 2006 18:25
If you read clearly it says can you give me ideas of how to make my GAME Death By Dawn, i attached a logo becuase i am proud of it and i wanted to show it to see what people think- the final version is my menu for my game.
And thanks K Jah for pointing out my mistake on my sig lol!
Thanks,
Kyle

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Tom0001
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Posted: 3rd May 2006 00:19
You also told us to rate it, which I did. Rate can also mean review.

Tom

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Posted: 3rd May 2006 00:45
uh, ok if you lack the imagination to come up with a concept for your game...is this really the hobby for you? Secondly, eveyone wants to make horror and it's not hugely original.but anyway, here's an Idea.

It's 1946, the second world war has come to a close.
You are Cole Garland, private in the 107th airborne, undergoing psycological evaluation due to the horrific scenes you witnessed during combat.
The game plays through cole's memories of the war, and the terrible monsters and aboninations he witnessed behind enemy lines.
(Yeah that's a cliche but I had to get the horror angle in there somewhere)
Each level is a different mission that Cole embarked on in the war. With the final level being Cole's attempted escape from his current encarceration in an asylum.

Will he be dead by dawn?
Will he survive the memories of his past?
Will santa ever visit me now im an adult?
Probably.

Now go make the best horror game ever thought up in 3 minutes.

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W H I S P E R
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Posted: 3rd May 2006 19:38
Now thats one amazing story THANKS!
Thanks once again!
Kyle

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Posted: 3rd May 2006 22:48
Quote: "it is a horror base game going through WW2 and Sci-Fi"


Well we've already had a WWII storyline so lets try sci-fi.

You are soldier in the Global Defence Collaberation, a worldwide army set up to prevent war on Earth and in space. You are sent on a covert operation to the planet Estel V to retrieve some stolen data [level 1]. In capturing the data you are caught and arrested by the alien race that live here. You are brought before their leader, at which point you free yourself and kill him/her/it and escape.

A bounty is put on your head, and now not only do you have assassins and aliens after you but you can't find a ship that will take you back to Earth so you have to go on the run.

The new leader promises that you will be dead by dawn...

AE

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Posted: 4th May 2006 01:04
I read it as Seath by Sawn.

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W H I S P E R
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Posted: 10th May 2006 22:37
thats coz writing is crap

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Posted: 1st Jul 2006 05:12 Edited at: 1st Jul 2006 05:12
I think you should have like some retard scientist made a time machine (Teleporter) (Goes back to WW2) And your captive at a Nazi Center and you have to find a way to go back to the future.That good enough?

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Posted: 1st Jul 2006 05:22
No. Great bump too.

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