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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Destiny: The Scourge Of Space

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DarthRic
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Hi im creating a new SI-FI game its called Destiny: The Scourge Of Space and is set in the year 2256, the story line is below and the screenshots are attached, tell me what you think.

The year is 2256, Earth has had 50 years of war with the Hemadron, the robots that were designed to make life easyer for Humans but for an unknown reason rebelled and attacked the Human race, but now the Human race has a breakthrough, a mysterious alien artifact has been recovered and your task is to retrieve this artifact for study and to unleash it's power as a potential weapon, but all is not as it seems and you have yet to descover the true enemy, one far more ancient and deadly than anyone can imagine...

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Tom0001
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Storyline is alright I guess, but post images as .jpg
I downloaded the image and I have to say it was nothing special at all. Just a large prefab room with some barrels which have been shot into the air. Make it more interesting.

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More custom media is always good too!

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Posted: 6th May 2006 10:56
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I need to emphasise what Tom said.

Seriously, never, ever, ever post images as *.bmp--they're huge--nobody want's to download a 3MB file when they can get a virtually instant image in *.jpg format with very similar quality. Plus, *.jpgs are given the option to just "View" them when they're up there, so it becomes even easier for people to use them.

Honestly, TGC needs to implement a rule or program Apollo to reject *.bmps, because I'm really getting tired of it.

Nothing against you, though, Darth. A lot of people do it, so don't feel like you've commited some vicious crime, it's just that it happens so often that it gets frustrating.


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Essal
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Posted: 6th May 2006 14:10
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Like The titlE
But story reminds me very much, of a Game another guy from denmark is doing...(The ONLY other dane here)

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DarthRic
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how do you convert BMP files to jpg, once informed how do do this I will post as jpg in the future

p.s. More exiting screenies coming soon
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DarthRic
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Never mind I have worked out how to create JPG's on my own heres another screenie nothing special but will have some battle screnies coming soon

p.s. if you don't find the screenshots interesting tell me what you want pictures of and I will get a snapshot for you all
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DarthRic
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lol forgot 2 attach sceen here it is

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Nigezu
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I have to say storyline isn't really original. And screenie doesn't look really good.
No offence though.

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if an ancient artifact has been recovered, why does the player need to retrieve it?

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Essal
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Posted: 6th May 2006 18:18
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good point

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DarthRic
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lol sorry I meant to post the robots had recovered the artifact
@ Nigezu: It may not sound origional but has an interesting twist in the plot, you will have to play to find out what this is
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Tom0001
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Meh, sounds crap.

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Paul112
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Hmm, im sure i've heard that storyline before, but i'll give you the benefit of the doubt.
Why not try experiementing with some different lighting togove a more 'spacy' feel?

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Quote: "Meh, sounds crap."


you are always so positive on everything tom, bravo... bravo...

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DarthRic
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:Update:
Multiplayer: 100%
Menu: 90%
Music: 10%
Single player: 10%
Voice recordings: 0%
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Tom0001
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Well it does. Telling us there is some kind of hype isn't good enough. You need to at least hint on what it is. You can't just say that you're game stands out because it has a twist in the plot. So what? Lots of games do.

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DarthRic
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the plot twist is to do with betrayal and facing inpossable odds and in the end (hopefully) prevailing despite all this
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inpossable? Impossible, you mean.

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Where are the lights? And the action. (I alrady know where the camera is, lol.)

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Quote: "Voice recordings: 0%"


I would be willing to be a voice-actor in your game. I work on a rate £1 per five minutes of dialogue. This may sound alot, but when you consider what how much a character in FPS game with no allies has to speak...

Just joking...i'll do it for free
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DarthRic
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Thanks avenging eagle I could use any voice recordings I can get I will post the parts below in case anyone else is interested

Colonel X: 30 Year old male colonel, your commanding officer needs to have an evil voice
James Walker: 20 year old male commando, needs to be the opposite of Colonel X
Akio: 20 year old female commando
Amanda Hamson: 23 Year old female field ops officer
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Avenging Eagle
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Give me a line of dialogue that i can test out the voices on,

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DarthRic
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Post your email and I will email you a line of dialogue for you to try out (sorry if I spelt that wrong)
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I updated my profile with an E-mail address for you.

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DarthRic
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sorry I havn't been posting lately I've been ill and the project halted for a while, but I should be back on track soon ill post that dialogue to you soon AE
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