Quote: "I like ambient, but your calliope or whatever it's called is too loud and the vinyl loop in the background is a little annoying. Also, there's not really a melody in there that I could find.
Don't get me wrong, it sounds technically nice, but I like my melodies
EDIT:
Still listening--- it's a little jarring the difference between the first 2/3rds and the last third."
Ahhh, the second genuinely helpful bit of crit I've received on this track!
You are indeed correct, the vinyl loop really ought to be cut out of the intro and only appear with the drums. The entire tune feels out of whack (mix and progression) to my ears, I decided I had to get some feedback or otherwise I'd never get any better.
Oh, and not to seem ignorant, but what's a calliope?
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