i think rich needs to fix the WWW button, it keeps putting http://www.darkbasicpro.com/apollo/forums before the actual address and really needs to open a new target window.
Looks like a basic model, just simple extrude geometry used. Try making the overall shape smoother - as you appear to be very new to modelling, ignore polygon counts and just try to make things look real... try to get the general shape of what your going for. Once you've gained skill in shapeing then try to lower the counts.
Remember a texture doesn't make the model, it is there to enhance and define the basic shapes you've already set.
From this it appears to be a max model, so probably just trying to cut some more shape and chamfer certain vertex would help alot.
Holy jumping mother of god NOOOO!!!...
Ahem I mean, I'll think about it