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Dano000
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Posted: 7th Nov 2006 01:43 Edited at: 7th Nov 2006 02:31
Hi ive been making a game called the city, im young so im not the best,would very much apriciate feedback!

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Dano000
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Posted: 7th Nov 2006 01:50
Here no.2 & 3 (sorry i didnt realize the size of the thing)

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Dano000
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sorry only no.2 (im new to this)

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Dano000
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Im going to release a beta now of one of my levles, i only started yesturday, so its nothing fancy. just basic.

you can only play if you accept the licence agreement!

Lisence agreement

1. dont sell it.
2. dont clam that its yours.
3. keep it for yourself dont distibute it.

thanks

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Dano000
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Posted: 7th Nov 2006 02:05
yeah, i will, but im only getting the ground stuff in first, then adding lighting.
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Posted: 7th Nov 2006 02:27 Edited at: 7th Nov 2006 03:43
Mod Edit

erase that.
put im young.


Hrmm...what can i say, it makes me want to play it honestly, it looks nice


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Dano000
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Posted: 7th Nov 2006 02:32 Edited at: 7th Nov 2006 02:36
you can play it, download the FPM and load it into you version of FPSC!
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Posted: 7th Nov 2006 04:42
it looks okay.
Just add a bit of lighting and youll be set

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Posted: 7th Nov 2006 06:54
You might want to re make the whole thing, from what I can tell it's just a bunch of entities placed with out any real reason. uhm...maybe I am being to critical. Keep up the good work!


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Dano000
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Posted: 7th Nov 2006 07:20 Edited at: 7th Nov 2006 08:51
ok,Fisrt thing is i havn't set a story yet, so it might seem a bit weird. Secondly yes it might seem like entities without a reason but that will change, for instance the shooting range (thats what i call it) with all the boxes and stuff will have enemies and eventually a second floor. This will have a spaceship on it where the next level begins.

-dano000
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umm sorry to ask but does anyone have some music that i could use. Im a shocking songwriter! obviously i would add the person who made the music in the credits!
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Spelling properly is always nice.

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Posted: 11th Nov 2006 09:17
what sort of music? duration? tempo?

People will need a little more info

But i know a site where you can get free music:
http://freeplaymusic.com/

AE

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Posted: 11th Nov 2006 23:14 Edited at: 11th Nov 2006 23:16
OK well since its in the future and in WW3 i need some music that is very sad. but at the same time in needs to be legato and also at the end a bit of techno. Also it would need to go for about 2 minutes.

-dano000

PS: I would have to pay the guys @ freeplaymusic.com!
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Posted: 12th Nov 2006 10:36
If you're making the game comercial, then yes.

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Posted: 18th Nov 2006 02:21
would anyone want to volenteer to compose some music???

-Dano000

PS: sorry i was off for so long i had a big school project!
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i can compose music!

www.freewebs.com/supahsfpscstuff
Laser Studios
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I have some music I'm giving away. No one bought if so you can use it royalty free. The only restrictions is you must give me credits for it. You may not claim as your own.
The End http://www.freewebs.com/laserstudio/The%20End.mp3
Dano000
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Posted: 20th Nov 2006 09:44 Edited at: 20th Nov 2006 09:51
Laser Studios Its exelentey but i also need to have some other instruments besides techno ones, if you know what i mean. altogether though its absolutly good!

Dano000

PS: what program did you use to make it?
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O sorry i forgot something, it has to be in MP3 and also very sad + grand!
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i can help! . Dunno bout the sad though...

Hello!
Dano000
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Posted: 21st Nov 2006 09:22
would be great could you give me a sample, or somthing!!
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when i opened beta1
it gave me this ->->->->->->->->->->->->->->->->->->->->->->|
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mess with the best die like the rest!!!

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Dano000
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hmm thats very strange?? do you have the RC3 update and all model packs, mayby that is the problem.

-dano000

PS: i got some music that i made myself ill keep you posted!!!
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It looks great.
But you could do some more details.
Make the player feel like he is really walking somewhere.
And not just put some houses, enemies. etc at a random place.

P.S This isnt a attack...

But still it looks great!

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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 23:53
Looks good...but does seem alittle random *as people have said before* trying making a drawing plan first, and add to your level design.
making large buildings and alleyways really makes it a city, not a few house lol.
Try a few custom textures, make custom walls etc with signs or magicFPS.

Good luck.

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Posted: 15th Dec 2006 00:04
like what everyone else said, more detail. What is the story to this? all we know is that it is set in ww3.


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Ok, what it is you are a spy for the FBI(or Maybe CIA, *undeciced*)and you have to kill enimies and go round collectn' items for the spy agency, then eventually the 'Final Battle' will be abourd a space ship. this is the thing... i have know idea what texture program to use!! Or what modeling one! so any reccomendations would be great!


-dano000

PS: ill improve on the levels im i bit short of time at the moment!!
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Posted: 19th Dec 2006 10:21
It looks alright for the start of a project. If you want free programs, download GIMP for textures and Anim8or for models. They both have tutorials all over the web so just google them.

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Dano000
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Posted: 20th Dec 2006 23:06
sorry to ask but how to actually import models created with anim8tor and texture them in GIMP. I have no idea since im very new to this kinda thing. could you plz tell me how to texture or import a model into GIMP

thank you very much!!

-dano000
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there are tutorials for that here in the tutorial city thread if you search

so what's the job?
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Posted: 2nd Jan 2007 22:51
It looks good, is the terrorist model part of model pack 3 or something


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