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FPSC Classic Models and Media / futuristic gun

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=adamW=
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Posted: 13th Dec 2006 20:53
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what do you think of this gun/what can i add to it?

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vorconan
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Posted: 13th Dec 2006 20:57
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scale the end of the scope out a bit

so what's the job?
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Luke314pi
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Posted: 13th Dec 2006 22:13
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It looks like if the player was holding that gun, you might not be able to see the end of the barrel because of the way it flares out before the barrel starts. Perhaps make the barrel longer, or reduce the flare. Otherwise it looks good.

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Silent Thunder
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Posted: 13th Dec 2006 23:45 Edited at: 13th Dec 2006 23:46
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not bad, remove that flare in front lik Luke said.

Also, could we see a perspecitve view?

(sorry, I'm just wondering because all of your past guns were cardboard cut-outs)


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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 02:42
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Gimme a c Gimme a a Gimme a r Gimme a d Gimme a b Gimme a o Gimme a a Gimme a r Gimme a d!!!!
WHAT DOES THAT SPELL????
CARDBOARD!!!!!!!!!

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Unknown Truth
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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 03:33
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Quote: "Gimme a c Gimme a a Gimme a r Gimme a d Gimme a b Gimme a o Gimme a a Gimme a r Gimme a d!!!!
WHAT DOES THAT SPELL????
CARDBOARD!!!!!!!!!"


That is so immature and also, that IS NOT cardboard. Cardboard basically means you layed down a few points, made it into a polygon and extruded which is obviously not what he did. Look a little closer and you might see.

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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 03:45
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OK I am sorry that was childish. But If you take a closer look the main gun is a cardboard. The the body does have a few cave ins near the barrel but the flares and the body are cardboard. The scope obviously isn't but overall the gun is. So I am sorry Adam W that was my mistake. I just think you need to try to uncardboard your stuff. You have great potential, and your guns are origional. Sorry.

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RedneckRambo
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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 06:41
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It is very good. I don't see it being cardboard. A little bit squared but not cardboard. Other than that I think it looks good.

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=adamW=
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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 08:22
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thanks for the commentsi tried hard not make a cardboard cutout i'll fix what you said
perspecive view in the next post

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Smitho
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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 08:24
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I think you're just putting on random extruded areas on it to make it look less cardboard, which just makes it look random.
The problem with your models is they are pretty much all cardboarders, and everytime you think of a new way to try and cover it up, but not actually fix the problem. What modelling suite are you using? I'll fish around for some tutorials for ya.
Dan.

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=adamW=
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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 08:29
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ah....my dad restarted my computer and didnt save my work

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How can he restart it when you are on it?

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JohannesM
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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 17:13
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maybe he had left it without saving and his dad went on...

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=adamW=
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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 19:33
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i use 3dsmax,i'll try make a new gun then make a new post

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Posted: 14th Dec 2006 19:42
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well done adam, you are very good at making these guns. i will never be good you are better.
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Could be a little better although im a bit rubbish myself but it really looks good in a way...

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