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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Urban Conflict!

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evil man
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Ok this is my first game so please be gentle.

Story:Your name is Jack,and you have peaceful life with your wife.One day the hell brakes lose,People are turning into monsters and zombies,Special units called "ZED" are starting to eliminate everything in the city!People are fighting for their lives,and street gangs are kidnaping and Fighting also.The street gang called "Teh ElIMin4tOrZ" kidnaped your wife and they ask for 500 000 $ for her or they'll cut her and send you pieces of her!This makes you pissed off!You grab your shotgun and start wiping out everything!

The game will have 10 levels.

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evil man
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Here is more screens

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evil man
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some more

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evil man
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The game will probably be freeware,as it's my first game.

one more screen

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evil man
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One more

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evil man
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Come on,can someone post some comments? This is my first game,could you tell me how to improve it?Please?


Also FPSC is the coolest software on the planet.

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Inverted
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It looks great,
keep it up

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Posted: 5th Jan 2007 20:06 Edited at: 5th Jan 2007 20:10
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"Also FPSC is the coolest software on the planet."

yeh he's right there. I really like the story-line of the Game very original, good old fashioned zombies, monsters and gangs. good combination of mayhem.

Maybe add some more light maps to your rooms and (from your screenies shown) try to use a bigger variety of weapons.

Other than that *thumbs up*

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I hate people saying: ''this is my first game, don't say it's bad.'' To be honest, your game doesn't look so great. You have to work on lightmapping a lot and improve your overall level desing. Your framerate is good but rooms look too large for what's in them. The story is kinda lame but I know that it isn't easy task to figure out a good one. In my opinion, it's kinda unrealistic that street gang kidnappes someone's wife.

Try to improve your game and it will have a great potential to be a great one.

Just my opinion,


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Thanks everyone!

this will keep me going,It feels good when someone says "your game is good" or "keep it up" or "Thumbs up",thanks everyone!

You guys are great!


Also i am working really hard on this game.

@Nigezuk,thanks for your comment,I will improve my game.

@everyone:thanks.

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This is good!

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Posted: 6th Jan 2007 07:45 Edited at: 7th Jan 2007 02:40
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honesty and reality time:

1.not believably urban feeling. switch the skybank to ww2/cty.

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Quote: "500 000 $"


its $500,000

3. I have yet to see the shotgun you mentioned in the storyline

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Quote: ""Teh ElIMin4tOrZ""


that is something I would expect a group of 5-6 graders to think up, and make a clubhouse in the tool shed in their backyards

5. Your framerate seems to be an issue at times. don't put more than three enemies near each other.

6. get rid of the glow below the ammo, its stupid.

7. set the health to 100, like it is in most games.

8. what does ZED stand for?

9. don't use that much stock media, it looks shoddy and bad. buy some of the model packs, and search for media on the forums.

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spex_guy:thanks.

Zaibatsu:I am sorry,but I am from Serbia and "Teh ElIMin4tOrZ" name is probably going to change.

ZED = Zombie Elimination Dudes.

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For a humoristic game, the names would work alright. But if you want to be more funny or serious, try to put some time into thinking up better names.

As for the game, it looks like your average kind of first FPSC game. I'd recommend you to get rid of that silly sci-fi glow under the ammo, as Zaibatsu said. It works alright for sci-fi themed multiplayer games, but now it just looks kinda stupid.

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Posted: 6th Jan 2007 17:18 Edited at: 6th Jan 2007 17:19
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Quote: "This makes you pissed off!"


Why? I don't get it. Unless you don't want her cut up and..... oh, I get it now. Never mind.

Your first pic is the best, but I'm not convinced it's a city setting.

In the second pic there's a teleporter in the bathroom? The ceiling appears to be old concrete but there is a nice white ceiling fan on it. The room is too big and empty. Not believable.

Pic 3 is... I don't know what that is.

Pic 4 is from a big empty space warehouse.

Pic 5 is ok except it's too big and empty again with glowing things on the floor.

Pic 6 looks like it belongs in a multiplayer map.

The pics don't look they belong in the same game and don't look believable.

Best

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Posted: 7th Jan 2007 08:30 Edited at: 7th Jan 2007 08:31
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Quote: "Why? I don't get it. Unless you don't want her cut up and..... oh, I get it now. Never mind."

hahahaha.

looks like a bunch of randomness to me, try making the scenery "flow" better with your, uh, storyline?


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Ok,the game progress is going good,but How can I get rid of that glow below the weapon?

Thanks.

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change the script to weapon.fpi instead of weaponglow.fpi.


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In pic one put a light under the light poles (not the whole thing - just under the lamp part) cause they are giving off the light effect yet there is no light...

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Quote: "Come on,can someone post some comments? This is my first game,could you tell me how to improve it?Please?"


Seriously, you waited like just a few hours, i mean you have people from all over the world here, hundreds of posts added all the time. First of all people can be in bed or at school or work when you post it so you cant expect immediate replies, it may take upto a day or two for a reply sometimes but thats life! Dont expect people to just hop to because you are impatient. Now that the rants over...
it looks ok for a first game made with stock

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Well it looks like a good name, but I don't really think the name fits it. Urban Conflict sounds like either a game VS terrorist or gangs. And what kind of name Teh Eliminatorz. The story is not that great. But it's your 1st game no hard feeling okay?

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good lookinig but the lighting must be improved and that stock media uhm....evil man u say you are from serbia im from croatia btw....cheers

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Cheers Grobar! (Zdrave brate sta ima! Ti si iz Hrvatske? Cool!)


I got all the 6 model packs,My game has improved a lot,I'll post screens tomorrow.

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you should work on a game name and story..(ma evo nista i ja se malo bacio u game making...jel imas msn,skype ili x-fire mozda)....cheers

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I advise you to try and use lights to your adavntage and in future use model packs 1 and 5. They are the most useful model packs there is. Model pack 5 contains very useful wepons for street warfare battles ie baseball bats with nails in them and knifes and pistols. You overall concept is very good though. Your next game, try to muck around a bit more with the settings like healh and life and sky.
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if i were you, evil man, i would buy a weapon pack.
i think without some cool weapons, an fps isn´t an fps.
But that´s only my hint for you.
the rest of the game looks fine!

i´ve written "jhon" the wrong way on purpose
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Yeah I bought all the model packs and they ROCK!

Here's the trailer of my game!

http://d.turboupload.com/d/1537968/Urban_conflict_trailer.rar.html

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The Story is original but if you have not, upgrade to V4. It should make lightmapping better when you do try to improve it. and I agree with the others on how the map isn't too "suburbs" looking.
Plus don't rush. Go take a shower and brainstorm while doing so and you should get ideas. Always works for me.
GOOD LUCK.



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Thanks everybody!

@Rilejarom:yeah thanks for tips,I have built better levels with models packs now,check out the trailer.

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I'm going to be honest here.

The story line is absolutely horrible. I can see this is your first game, and I am going to tell you what every other person does when they see a first game - Improve your level designing.

It looks like you've opened a new level, placed random doors everywhere and thrown in some entities.

Try to give it a puzzle-like environment, where the path to get to the end isn't the most obvious. Try to keep all of the items in the one timeframe!

Don't worry though, I haven't created my first game in FPSC yet, so chances are it will be horrible.

Keep working and you will improve greatly!

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Just what KamiKazi Games says, it's horrible. But keep working on it and (hopefully ) it will improve.

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try to include more entities. Even the stock media entities are alright. Also use the model pack 2 entities more often in it. Your rooms are to big for so few entities. I like the story though.

here is a small storage room made only using stock media but it is still pretty good.

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and another

Precinct 101 demo available

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Luciferia, I cant see any thing better in your screens, than what evil man has posted.

Evil man, its a better idea to plan out your level on graph paper and use each square as one segment. Don't just place entities every where to fill up a room, place them where they can be of some use to the level and also to make the player feel engaged in the action.

Also, placing blood decals all over the place is not going to make your game any better, the same with fire decals.
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I never use decals! They float in the air, they are laggers, and they suck!

Yeah, do what Higgins said. I usually plan out the levels on graph paper, then I go to Microsoft Word, or whatever, and I type down how the game will look, what's in it, where you start, all that junk.

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Thanks for comments.

Are you commenting the screenshots,or the game trailer?

Have you seen the trailer?

Here's the link:

http://d.turboupload.com/d/1537968/Urban_conflict_trailer.rar.html

The size is 14 Mb.
Check out the trailer,and please leave comments about trailer.

Thanks.

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Here you go,Trailer 2!

http://d.turboupload.com/d/1679941/Urban_conflict_trailer.rar.html

Expect the game soon,soon it'll be out.


Of course it'll be free.

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Here's the trailer from YouTube!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3yRDe42ngHI



Please tell me what you think of it.

Thank you!

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Yeah, I really hate stocked media, good too start on and practise with..but to make a game with it..

big..hahaha..you said big!
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the video was interesting try not swearing so much it's usually though of as unprofessional. On the good side the music was good but obviously copyrighted the black screen for the last 2 minutes with only music playing were real strange too.
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1: Very good for your first go.
2: It pays to keep an eye on the fpsc media forum. you can get many helpful items from there. Ie breakable planks to board up your doors and windows.
3: www.fpsfree.com look at the download section.
4: You need to get your buildings more urban. I kno its your first go but you are using ww2 cottages. Try using a segment and make it 3 storeys high and add a couple of fake windows.

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Thanks.

I try my best to get the game look better.

Levels have changed a lot now,I added different skybox and more entities have been added.

The only problem is uploading the game,I have DSL connection with 256 kb/s,so I'll have to find someone who'll upload my game.

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Quote: "Thanks.

I try my best to get the game look better.

Levels have changed a lot now,I added different skybox and more entities have been added.

The only problem is uploading the game,I have DSL connection with 256 kb/s,so I'll have to find someone who'll upload my game."


If you mean put your game online so other can download it, you can just upload it on www.filefront.com for free.

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No, his problem is that it will go too slow.

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