I had to double post as it wouldn't let me edit.
I don't like the name Visgard. How about Valgomire? Or whatever you can come up with.
I think the Eye of Jupiter should be a magical stone set in a necklace, we could have other magic stones set in other objects like weapons (keeping the roman god theme).
For Example:
The Staff of Mercury (Magic Skill)
The Spear and Shield of Mars (Skirmish Skill)
The Bow of Diana (Archery Skill)
The Trident of Neptune (Piercing Skill)
The Hammer of Vulcan (Heavy Arms Skill)
The Helm and Armour of Minerva (Armour)
This is just a vague idea, if you don't like it that's cool.
I see this as a three-part story.
* The Rise of The Two Kings (how Theolus and Valgomire became enemies and the most powerful kings in Annom)
* The Eye of Jupiter (THIS GAME: the pivotal period of the great war, which concludes in a victory for the West)
* The Skyhawk (After a long time of peace, a new enemy emerges!)
[EDIT]
I'm now thinking we should have four characters.
A courageous knight (sword, mace and spear/lance), a skilled marksman elf (bow and dagger), a powerful wizard (magic), and a strong warrior (warhammer, axe and trident)(could go for the obvious dwarf character lol).
The way I was thinking of making this was that it is single player and you switch between the character you are controlling. I don't know how to do multiplayer
DD, I will leave this up to you for a while, can you find some good monsters to put in the game (need pics) and post any additions to the story you'd like

I know I've dragged the concept out a bit but I want to get a really good story
I am King of the noobs!
