lol this sounds like me at my first game will kinda.
I say you make a whole new post with the new name and everything and put you new story in the first post get you BEST screenies. then just work from there.
And you have to add alot more light sources and turn down your Ambient light down a bit so it gets more of an feel to it.
And trust me you will learn alot from your mistakes here. Good luck with your game. And take your time dont hurry just to get stuff out there take your time and make sure its close to being ready or what you think is finished. Good Luck
Check out my game post The Dead Lives. could be helpful