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FPSC Classic Product Chat / [LOCKED] Screen Shot Compo # 13: Stock Media

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TerrorNation
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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 14:27
Any comments on my screenshot? Any improvements to be made?
Kalinka
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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 15:22
can we change the textures ?

Metal Devil123
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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 16:08
Quote: "can we change the textures ?"

Retexxtures aren't stock. So, I believe no. Stock textures only, as far as I know.

What do you think of my screenshot!?!? Anyone!?!?

God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
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And the wisdom to know the difference.
Kalinka
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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 16:32 Edited at: 11th Apr 2010 16:48
it doesnt matter anymore though

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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 16:50
Quote: "Near Breslau, Germany"


Been playing Der Riese, eh Kravenwolf?


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Kravenwolf
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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 16:55
I was wondering when someone would pick up on that

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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 20:09
@TerrorNation: Your screenshot is kinda bland and dark, but its interesting. Add a few more entities here and there, increase the light range and make them more of a white-yellow instead, then make it so you cant see over the edge and your screen will be great!

Kalinka
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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 20:29
lol, red eye i see few cables, a tree and buildings in your entry. i'm pretty sure they arent in fpsc's stock media

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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 22:17
I believe thats a skybox.

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TerrorNation
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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 22:40
@ Coach Shogun 20

Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on getting my screenshot 'great'!
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Posted: 11th Apr 2010 22:46
and on my picture anybody? it was the first entry ?


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Posted: 12th Apr 2010 00:53
Haha, okay Bloody James.

You're screen doesn't even look like stock (in a good way, of course ) I'd be interested to see where a full game like that made by you would go.

@TiTaniUm: Yours looks fantastic as well, the only thing I don't like is that blood splatter.

@Josh Mooney: That looks extremely empty and high-contrast. I'd add some entities and take the screenshot without the gun, then the bright light won't be as bad.

@AbdulAhad: That's a great start for mapping. I'd add a few more entities here and there, but otherwise, you're good. I don't care much for that body there, it just ruins the mood for me.

@MetalDevil: Yours looks good, I like the style of it. I would expect just a few more things to be scattered around on the ground though.

@Imperfect Sheep: That looks great! Very atmospheric and moody.

@Kravenwolf: Not much to say on yours, it looks great. It has just the right amount of everything.

@RedEye: Yours looks great, but like everybody (and myself) has said, you have to change the skybox for it to be valid. Don't worry though, you have plenty of time.

@Cyclone: Yours is another great sci-fi one. It has just the right amount of entities to make it good.

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Posted: 13th Apr 2010 16:52
Quote: "Yours looks good, I like the style of it. I would expect just a few more things to be scattered around on the ground though."

Ok, I will. I will do EVERYTHING to win, cause I have very interesting idea in my mind for the next compo...

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Posted: 13th Apr 2010 20:01 Edited at: 14th Apr 2010 12:10
I've updated my screenshot on the first page.
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Posted: 13th Apr 2010 23:01 Edited at: 14th Apr 2010 13:31
I'll take a shot at it, never entered a competition for FPSC cause I don't use it enough.

EDIT :

Here is my entry. Made with x10 (Note some things in this image are X10 onlu stock media, preferably the gun and the characters down there)

Image quality was reducted
http://image.fps-files.com/images/57Contest_Map.jpg[/img]


I also got it attached

Windows 7, Amd Athlon 7750 Black Editon (64 bit,3ghz + Dual Core), ATI Readon HD 4870 1gb Edition, 4gb Ram.

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Bugsy
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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 00:46
here's my entry, it's called "bunker"

http://imageflock.com/img/1271195132.jpg

I made it fpsc with fenix bloom and horror mod dynamic ambience. I added vignetting.


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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 00:58
Wow thats pretty cool

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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 01:35
@ KravenWolf Sorry to ruin the moment but is that a stock media skybox? Its pitch black...

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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 02:56 Edited at: 14th Apr 2010 02:56
Nope, the black sky was done in GIMP.

Quote: "4. You can use a photo manipulation program to enhance your screen."


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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 08:09
ok... I was just making sure.

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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 16:03
DAMN Bugsy! There goes my chances of winning this! That is the awesomest screenie ever!

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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 16:32
thank you metal devil. when's the end date?


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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 16:55
@ Bugsy

April 23rd, 2010

It's on the first post
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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 17:49 Edited at: 14th Apr 2010 17:56
Updated version of my Pic. Fooled around with another pic and I like how this turned out. And wish you all Best of Luck!



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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 21:40
Here's mine.


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How did you made that?


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Posted: 14th Apr 2010 22:32
Have been too busy, how many days left?

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Quote: "How did you made that?"

I used photoshop...

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I think you overused photo shop to be honest, too bloomy and blury

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Posted: 15th Apr 2010 22:25
I don't have any chance of winning anyway, so it doesn't really matter what sorta screen I post, LOL!

PW Productions
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Posted: 16th Apr 2010 00:50
You have 9 days left!

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Posted: 16th Apr 2010 01:27
cool, mine's done


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Posted: 17th Apr 2010 09:51
A lot of nice pics here!

By the way, who made the stock ww2 and sci fi packs? I like them and actually think they are well done.
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Posted: 17th Apr 2010 10:44
I've got one that I think turned out quite decent. I probably won't win though.

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@TheCoolGuy

Those arent stock walls, and you should do something to cover up the door glitch, like a cupboard there.
I like the way how it looks 3rd person, but the lighting really brings it down a bit, especially the blue light.
A different type of character may fit the scene better i think.

The perspective is really cool, but as with everything, there is always room for improvement. Keep it up

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Haha, thats funny, I didn't even notice the door thing. :S

Yeah, I was was basically like, "Hm... I don't know if I should keep this blue or not..."

Maybe it would be better if the enemies has a red light on them with fire in some places?
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Here is a usefull tip.
look around the room at things close to your lights (providing they are on)
Is it pure red or pure white?
NEVER.. EVER use stock colored lighting.
EVER.
Quote: "Even if there is a fire"


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@TiTaniUm: Those walls are stock with X10, which may be used.

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when's this one over?
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The 23rd.

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Quote: "Nope, the black sky was done in GIMP.


Quote: "4. You can use a photo manipulation program to enhance your screen."


Kravenwolf"


Erhm, sorry to be so... eh, rule-y, but by Rule #4, it means you can edit your screenshot, not any textures. But I suppose that's ok, since there is no detail in a black skybox.

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Quote: "I probably won't win though. "


Hey, don't be so negative. I thought I was going to lose, but just look at my signature and avatar

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Posted: 20th Apr 2010 04:56 Edited at: 20th Apr 2010 04:56
I understood rule #4. I used the free select tool in GIMP to crop a stock skybox out of the original screenshot, and then filled the area in with black.



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Oh, sorry. Y'know, I hate it when people use the '' smiley.

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I knew I should have used this one:

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Just had to do it.

I wont change my screenie, becouse I kinda don't want to start all the changing rumba, and want to go with the first try.

I have to put this; in my signature now

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3 more days.

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Quote: "The white light in the sky is a search light from a helicopter."


They actually had no helicopters in ww2


Too bad I don' t have any stock media in its original state left



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Quote: "They actually had no helicopters in ww2 "


Actually, helicopters were in fact, around during the WWII era. Though, not necasarily on the battlefield. (I posted a few links on the previous page when someone else brought that up) Anyway, the choice to add a helicopter to my screenshot was more of a fictional touch, to go along with the location

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Quote: "Too bad I don' t have any stock media in its original state left"


Haha, maybe next time Wolf.

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lol, ok, let's not start a smiley contest here...

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says: Me wants smiley contests. whats me win?

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