Thank you MrValentine your comments have been extremely helpful so far, I often miss things like its and it's, theirs and there's, when I'm writing; pointing these out to me are extremely helpful and improve the overall professional image of the work. This is an area in which I can be weak. Occasionally my turn of phrase can be a little awkward as well which you also spotted.
Normally I have my grandmother read through it my fiction novels and she points this sort of thing out to me! But computers both bewilder and scare her
she's recently sworn off her laptop and started hissing like a cat at her broadband router when walking past while making various holy symbols in the air.
I should youtube it, it would go viral in minutes, then I could retire off googles ads
@cryptojoe
I am keen for you to be involved crytojoe just send me your google e-mail address or the e-mail address you use to sign into google drive and I'll certainly add you to the share list.
I'm now working on chapter two, just some extra images to add in. I'm planning to cover the IDE's basic functions, and then add a reference section at the end of the book describing the more advanced function. This is so that users will get all the essentials from the first chapter without overloading them with ALL the IDE features at once, while at the same time keeping the information readily available should they want to go that one step further.
