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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Tamrilve- Zoneon Studio's new game, WIP, continuos update thread

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zniper monkey
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Posted: 24th Apr 2006 21:09
Tamrilve:The Elven Chapters is a fantasy action game. In it you play as Jenise, a nord who has learned a destiny she must fulfill. The awful Headra has found the Eltinian Key and has taken hold of the land of Tamrilve summoning creatures from beyond. There is a book that can counteract these effects allowing for the key to be returned to its rightful position, but if it falls into the hands of Haedra it could be the end of the world as we know it. This book, the elven chapters, mus be gathered by Jenise before it is to late. This is a game of swords, bows and magic and there is a possibility with the release of Riker 9 that rideable dragons will be added. Attached to this post you'll find the cover.

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Posted: 24th Apr 2006 21:09
A sample HUD idea.

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Posted: 25th Apr 2006 01:48
Screenshots?

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Posted: 25th Apr 2006 03:23
cool hud!
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Posted: 25th Apr 2006 03:56
Well the drawings are a bit off if you ask me..

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Posted: 26th Apr 2006 11:16 Edited at: 26th Apr 2006 11:17
cool huds
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Posted: 26th Apr 2006 14:15
Im dirty minded. So the logo is wierd.

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Posted: 26th Apr 2006 15:03 Edited at: 26th Apr 2006 15:32
Tamrilve (spelled Tamriel)...and nord...and haedra...those names are from The Elder Scrolls series...all of them...

The plot...it also seems almost exactly the same as in Oblivion (with the exception of Emperor's murder)

So uhh, you're going to make...an Oblivion ripoff? WTF?!

Not very orginal, I must say. You just copied the plot from Oblivion and even kept the same names for races and places.

And the HUD isn't nice-looking either. It looks like it's been drawn in one minute with Paint. The sword doesn't look like a sword. It's not sharp at all, and you should really improve the edges of it.
The crown is weirdly shaped, and again, not as sharp as it should be.

However, if you *DO* manage to get some kind of magic system and bows to the game, then it sounds great...but why do all that with FPS Creator? FPS Creator is, logically, intended for making FPS games, not RPGs.

EDIT: Rideable dragons?
EDIT (2): In-game screenshots? Demos? Trailers?

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Posted: 26th Apr 2006 16:59
hmm.

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Posted: 26th Apr 2006 17:20
Holy crap, I just realized that! This story is as stupid as Jack Thompson's Video Game Speech. I bet he's gonna throw in some skeletons and have the keenblade in a poorly made laggy village. I'd like to see you try to make steep hills and portals and npc conversations. HAH!!

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Posted: 26th Apr 2006 17:29
Portals is really easy to script, if he knows how to script of course.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 01:53
I mean the gates to the planes of oblivion. It takes you to another level and when you go back you go to the last level again.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 17:19
Hadera comes from Hades, god of death, there for representing evil and is a human not supernatural being. Tamrilve really may look similar, but in no way is it. Nord is a universal fantasy creature such as an elf and an orc. Would I be copying LOTR if I had an orc? No, same as a nord. The story is you will See is not like Oblivion as you will See in the final product and to clarify it's not an RPG, but an action/adventure. Plays like an FPS with a fantasy setting. There are also no portals involved. Call it an Oblivion ripoff all you want, and you will find yourself mistaking when the game does come around

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 17:54
Yeah, we will find ourselves mistaking it will be a waste of 300 megabytes.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 18:34
Quote: "Hades, god of death,"

Quote: "and is a human not supernatural being"

You said he was a god, then you said he was a human.
lol. Just lol...

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 19:44 Edited at: 27th Apr 2006 19:45
The plot and names still sound oddly like Oblivion. Why keep similiar names like Tamrilve? Of course, I can be mistaken. Would be glad to see some screenshots of the game though.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 19:51
Maybe he doesn't even have FPSC?

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 20:43
Hades wase reffered to as a god, hadera as a human.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 21:32
The first level is very simple. You need to get to the city Arganoff yet the way is blocked. You find a gnome who has a flying contraption, but he needs a favor done if you want to ride it. There are three Facinian Diamonds hidden in the churches crypt. Unfortunately another group is searching for it down below and will use force to protect it. with that the gnome hands you a bow and bids you on to search the crypt for the three diamonds. Altar, very wip.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 21:32
One of the church, again WIP.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 21:42
Stock media! You haven't even got a roof in your church. I suggest to add roof so player can't see in the sky!

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 21:43
sorry but those last 2 screenies look like Sh*t

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 22:15
I concur.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 22:40
untextured gnome flyer

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 22:42
shot 2

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 22:46
make sure to post in jpg

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 22:48
sorry about that, must of gone back to default.

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Posted: 27th Apr 2006 23:56
Creature list part 1:

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Posted: 29th Apr 2006 15:21 Edited at: 29th Apr 2006 19:48
That is NOT .jpg either. POST IN .jpg then we will look at them.

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Posted: 29th Apr 2006 16:15
Gnome flyer?.. Need to do a favour to use it?..

Im not a fan of the online browser game 'Runescape', but I did play it breifly, and this idea is 100% stolen from it. There is a gnome who has a contraption called a 'Gnome Flyer' , you need to do him a favour then you can use it.

You need to seriously re-think this game. It is plaugerised from other top-budget games and uses FPSC stock media. This is not worth a showcase post, or any of our time.

This may be harsh but there are so many threads like this. Its out of control.
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Try lining up the words correctly in the word document, and please use some custom media. The original media is okay if you use it right, but the lighting is terrible so try to place different areas with different light. It doesn't really look like a chruch to me, sorry, with all the sofas.

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BAH! Looks rubbish

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Posted: 29th Apr 2006 17:36
Quote: "It doesn't really look like a chruch to me, sorry, with all the sofas."


Yeah, add some TVs in front of them

Well my fears seem to be proven right now. Do you even have swords, magic or bows in your game? Or was that just hype?

If that wasn't hype, try to make your screenshots look better. Why not have a bow equipped on the screenshot, so we would have at least something to look at. Or perhaps, post a screenshot of a fireball spell or something similiar. Or swords. Even the keenblade will do, but there's already been some games that use it.

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