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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / Darkest Nightmare

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Fuzz
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Hi...

This is my first game. Darkest Nightmare is a modern day horror.

Ill update the story later.

The Game will be split up into chapters.

CHAPTER 1

Hotel:

Level 1 100%
Level 2 70%
Level 3 00%

WEAPONS IN GAME

AT9
Colt 45
Python
Sporting 12
Rifle
Scoped Rifle
MP5K

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Another screenie

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Mr Kohlenstoff
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Posted: 16th Jan 2008 16:30
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The second screenshot is much to dark, but apart from that it looks nice, even if there's not really much to see. Some more screenshots and information would help for more informative comments.

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thanks Mr Kohlenstoff

another screen

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Posted: 16th Jan 2008 19:04
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fuzz,

A bit of advice for ya mate, remember that a dark room is not the only thing that scares people..

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Needs more content in the room, not just random content like crates and stuff, but content that should belong in that particular room.

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Posted: 17th Jan 2008 02:49
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Quote: "A bit of advice for ya mate, remember that a dark room is not the only thing that scares people.."


Yep i no just wait a bit longer.

Quote: "Needs more content in the room, not just random content like crates and stuff, but content that should belong in that particular room."


yeah ive updated the level a bit but you would understand a bit more if you were playing. But thanks anyway

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The third room is too low, too big and too empty. What content is there doesn't mix well. It's a very large, badly wall-papered, low cieling room with a fan and doors from a space ship.

The assumption is that you showcase your best work. You're not giving us much to look at. Put more height, angles, and items in the scene so we have more to look at. The bathroom is the best shot, simply because there are items and angles that play in the spaces between shadow and light. We have to look around the picture to discover it, while the large open room can be entirely seen at a glance. We are not left wondering what is behind this, or in that shadow, or around that corner.

That being said.... it's a bathroom. Not too exciting. You're going to have to work harder to WOW us.

Please try to take peoples comments with a grain of salt, and use it to improve. Look at some of the better showcasees here and see how others are making more interesting scenes. It's a good start.

Best of luck with it.

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Quote: "and doors from a space ship."


Yeah lol there ment to be elevator doors because they are like the only ones.


Quote: "Best of luck with it."


Thanks and thanks for the tips

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Screenie

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last one for now

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On that first screenshot out of the last 3, try putting in some lights where those light fixtures are. It would look a lot more realistic, and really, really cool.

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Like this?

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that last screenshot has a lot better lighting in it, good job! Now try to stick with your more normal colored lights. (whites and off whites or very pale colors)


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Yeah, like that. Maybe a little brighter, although it may just be the computer I'm on.

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Quote: "that last screenshot has a lot better lighting in it, good job! Now try to stick with your more normal colored lights. (whites and off whites or very pale colors)"


Thanks and thanks for the tip

Quote: "Yeah, like that. Maybe a little brighter, although it may just be the computer I'm on."


Ill see what i can do

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Quote: "Now try to stick with your more normal colored lights. (whites and off whites or very pale colors)"


Like this?

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another screenie

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If you want my opinion... LIGHTMAPS NEEDED! Are you using the latest version as well? And also put into perspective how light really works in reality. Try to keep the ambiance light to around 6-10 for a true "dark" feel. Do that and work on entity placement and you can be on your way to making it better!!!

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thanks ASTEK

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looking good, make a low ambience and use lights more often like what astek said.

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Place the light marker just in front of the entity you are trying to use as the light source.

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Quote: "Quote: "Now try to stick with your more normal colored lights. (whites and off whites or very pale colors)"

Like this?


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On the screenshot in this post, add two more lights to the fixture. One on each side of the middle one, but at a strength of 10. It will make it look like the entire light is lit, instead of just the middle.

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Quote: "looking good, make a low ambience and use lights more often like what astek said."


Thanks

Quote: "On the screenshot in this post, add two more lights to the fixture. One on each side of the middle one, but at a strength of 10. It will make it look like the entire light is lit, instead of just the middle."


Ok will do. Thanks for the help

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No problem. It was a nice solution that I found that doesn't lower your FPS. Well, at least it shouldn't...

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Your really helping me gunn3r

Thank you

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I do what I can to help out. If you need anything else, don't be afraid to email me or just flat out ask me here.

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Thanks heaps gunn3r

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