You do realise that no-ones honestly going to follow those links and download them to see this......
Also, use Photobucket for images, then use the [img][/img] tags......HTML doesn't work.....
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Ok, three of those five pictures were of guns randomly floating above tables.....very realistic......
The other two were boring.....big areas with no entities to fill them in, boring stock media....probably put together in about 15 minutes....
Your lighting is quite poor, the whole map is open-air so I'm suspecting lag will surely be in this.....I don't think anyone will want to play this mate, to be brutally honest.....
I mean, masses of people are addicted to Halo 3 MP, not only because it's fast-paced, but because it also looks good......You need to really make this look good to get people interested....