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noobgamer
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hello this is my newest game ive been working on,(yes i am going to finish this game)

story-u escape from jail no u have to run away from police and the swat.(going to be executed for 6 murders).

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Posted: 26th Jun 2008 09:37
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You need more screens and story is not so good.

I like the first picture.

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Hmm... This sounds like a 2 minute story! Take more time for the story.

Screen: It looks not like a Jail... And you must work on your lightmapping! But you have a good leveldesign!

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noobgamer
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Posted: 26th Jun 2008 23:45
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well im still working on the story.


another screenshot.

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noobgamer
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Posted: 26th Jun 2008 23:59
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another screenshot (lvl 2)

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So first you are underground then in a scifi area?

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Quote: "So first you are underground then in a scifi area?"

Maybe it's a plot-twist?

Anyhow, I'll basically say what the others did, work some on the story. It doesn't have to be anything amazing, just a quick, thorough summary that's expandable for future ideas that might come.
The level design is pretty nice, keep it up.

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Ty everyone,and Wat u mean underground to scifi thing? and im still working on the story.
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Posted: 27th Jun 2008 20:26
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better light??

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Posted: 29th Jun 2008 02:01 Edited at: 30th Jun 2008 19:14
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any comments?
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New screen was really nice.

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Those are some good screens. Your level design is pretty good, but your story could use some work. Then again...That's the opinion of someone who likes to plan out and write like six pages of story for a single game idea.
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*cough* ralpy *cough* looking good, could use some work on story tho
Quote: "That's the opinion of someone who likes to plan out and write like six pages of story for a single game idea"


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noobgamer
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OK how bout this for the story


story-u were gunna be executed in a week so you were sent to a 'special' prison until a prison break and now you think your free? well not yet. Know you have to do anything to get away from the cops when they spot you.


better??
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another screenshot

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I don't like the yellow lights, try using a tan color. Other than that I guess its ok...

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do they have a tan color light?
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You need a better story. How about this:

Dave told me that they had it all ready. They had a plan that would finally get us all free from this place... My name is James. I am to be executed two weeks from this Thursday, for a crime that I did not commit. I have been in prison for seven weeks and three days, counting each day. So how am I going to escape from a prison on lock down? Well, some of the other inmates and I have a plan. I don't know how they did it, but somehow they got there hands on guns. We plan to make a full scale escape from the most protected prison in the world. I have nothing to lose now, so why not?

I don't care if you use it or you don't. I was bored and wanted to do something.



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aw thanks dude. that is way better then mine i will defintly use dat instead.
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Cool, by the way, the new shot looks good but it needs a place where the light comes from (light source).



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Posted: 30th Jun 2008 22:43 Edited at: 30th Jun 2008 22:46
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ok this doesnt make sens.

Quote: "some of the other inmates and I have a plan. I don't know how they did it, but somehow they got there hands on guns. We plan to make a full scale escape from the most protected prison in the world."


If its the most pretected prision in the world how do some inmats get a hold of guns. It would be vertuly inposibal for inmats to get guns in a normal prison let alone the best in the world. I would suggest figering out a way to make that more realistic...

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An inside job? One of the guards maybe? The point is that you don't know how. Weird things happen you know.



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Ya I gess. maby you could change it to: I don't know how they did it, but somehow they got there hands on guns. Theres a rumer about a guard being in on it. We plan to make a full scale escape from the most protected prison in the world. I have nothing to lose now, so why not?

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ya.....and i dot have enything da hangs from the ceilings i didn't find eny at fpsfree or fps-files (haven't looked dat hard either but.....):/
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humm maby I could make one and put it on FPSmedia

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would it be a freebie?if not how much would it cost *if* you make one?
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I could do one for free, but I'd need a reference image...at least I think I'd be able to make one.

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well im trying to model my self but i cant pay for milkshape and im done with the trial thing. what u mean refrence image??? o and how do u do the cover image thing? like its set to this yellow scrtchy thing how do u change it?
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Ok dude well a refrence image woul dbe nice. I would deffently make it a freebie. Unless its like really hard. Also if theres any models you need post it on the FPSmedia forums and ether deathhead or I will wip it up for you ASAP.


EDIT: Ok I just made a thread on FPSmedia for requests , its in general talk.

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ok ty. ill try to get more screenshots and maybe a movie up tonight.
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another screenshot.

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screenshot

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They look decent, except the purple light. But where is the light coming from? You have to place some light sources. Go to "WW2->Wall Furniture".



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ya i know but those ones are for the side not the ceiling. im trying to find one that dangles from the ceiling. i made one in sketchup but cant export it.
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There is one in model pack 3. There is also one in ww2 wall furniture.



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Posted: 2nd Jul 2008 00:08 Edited at: 2nd Jul 2008 00:11
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i cant buy any model packs . where i dont see it.


uhh nvm i found it
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Okay, maybe you can show what the screens look like with light sources.



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ok heres one...ill get one later.

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hey i'll model some too as only one light source will get booooring.
note:try reading this thread to help you export it in .x format.http://forum.thegamecreators.com/?m=forum_view&t=133054&b=24
hope this helps

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rofl i was just looking at that thread then i came over here lol. ty. but wat is the size relationship between those? like if its big in the sketchup thing would it be big in fpscreator or small??

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That's some pretty nice screenies you've got there.

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ty.

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i think it would be big but only trial and error will tell.

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