Well, I've played and finished it.
I've finished Fallout 3 last week on the PS3, so I'm familiar with the game.
You try to get a Fallout-esque look to it, but you should try to make your own game, based on your ideas! Just an idea
As a review:
GRAPHICS:
As for the graphics, you have some areas in the level that blend correctly, others that seem just overcrowded with models. Like an example, the room where you start the level is simple but well done. As you get outside, you see lots of models and lots of shadows that don't seem realistic.Take a look at other games or reference photos, or even go outside and look at the shadows of cars, objects, and people.
Some objects, like windows and so, are not well placed and cause the game to look ugly in those parts.
Your retexturing skills are reasonable.
Graphics:4/10
SOUND
Average, it would be nice to add voices, since you use basic NPCs.
Sound:5/10
GAMEPLAY
Average FPS play with the two NPC's. It's good to have NPC's to add extra realism to a game. Thumbs up for that. As for the rest, it's pretty much fight your way through 5 or 6 enemies.
Gameplay:6/10
OVERALL: 5/10
It's probably your first test, and it's not bad!Hope my tips help.