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FPSC Classic Models and Media / My first gun - BoltGun

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PW Productions
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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 18:44 Edited at: 20th Dec 2009 05:51
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Scroll down to the 'surprise' part and see how I've improved...


Hey guys, just learned how to animate... Been usin' the trial of FragMotion for a while, just bought it the other day, and decided to test out my skills with FPSC.

I will release it if EAI lets me use his hands (but the animations are custom).

I'll have to redo the idle, reload and definitely the walking anims, they kinda weren't good, but shouldn't be too hard to fix.

Ok, here's some screens... (for some reason the gun didn't turn out as 3d as it seemed in AC3D - It had ridges n' everything, but oh well)







Over all, I think it turned out pretty well

If I get permission from EAI, I'll release it for sure.

POST FEEDBACK!

Cheers

PwP

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looks pretty cool, but I no nothing about modelling or animating sooooo

I noticed that the flash from the gun is not near the barrel though :/

Nice work

Thanks,

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 18:49
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Oh, I know. I was too lazy to fix it...If I can release it, it'll be the first thing to be fixed...

You see those white spots? Those were supposed to be transparent, don't know why it didn't work....

Also, it only works with shaders off, don't know why.

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 19:00
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Quote: "You see those white spots? Those were supposed to be transparent, don't know why it didn't work...."


I believe you need to make those spots black in order for them to be transparent. Anyway this looks great!

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 19:08 Edited at: 18th Dec 2009 19:10
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Oh, oops...

Thanks for the nice comments



EDIT

Got the muzflash lined up better... working on the transparency now...





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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 20:12
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The muzzleflash should be moved more forward,right now its too close,otherwise excellent job.

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It is very nice, and I hope you get a premission to publish. Only thing left is the muzzle flash...


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Quote: "for some reason the gun didn't turn out as 3d as it seemed in AC3D"

They always look more detailed in the modeling programs for me too.
Even the animations that are noticable in the modeling program become overlooked in FPSC.
I have found that the animations on some things turn out better when excess is used in the modeling program.
It all takes a lot of tweaking, but you will get better at it with practice.

This looks great for a first weapon.
Well done, and keep at it.

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 20:41
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Thanks all I'm now working on a Bolt Pistol that looks even better as I figured out a better way to do anims.

How would I go about getting permission from Errant?


Oh, and I redid the walking animations, looks a hell of a lot better.

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 20:58 Edited at: 18th Dec 2009 21:14
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Double post

Here's a video, so sorry for the bad quality. The animations are very VERY smooth, but the recorder ruined it

Tell me what you think please...
EDIT: oops vid too big, hold on, zippin' it up...

http://www.mediafire.com/file/zzmggmymmnm/clip0002.avi

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 21:21
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Looks cool mate.
You ought to get something other than ac3d in my opinion though, even wings 3d, more flexibility

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This is soo cool! hope you get permission! you can use Blender or MilkShape! thats the best programs i know!

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 22:29
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Quote: "You ought to get something other than ac3d in my opinion though"


Thanks, but I'm very, very satisfied with AC3D as I've been using it almost ever since it first came out. I also know a lot of handy tricks. Please don't argue what I should get (@ everybody, not GJ)

I'm having this new problem where my gun is white, yet the hands are normal (it's a pistol I'm working on)... Will post a screen soon.

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 22:39
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Great work for the first time!!

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Quote: "Thanks, but I'm very, very satisfied with AC3D as I've been using it almost ever since it first came out"

Ok

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 23:02 Edited at: 18th Dec 2009 23:04
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Here's the pistol I'm working on (basically finished)...













2 things, the texture is low quality, I know.
And you see that rigger shaped thing? It's not a trigger, it's like the middle of the gun where the left hand holds it. It just looks like a trigger.

comment, please

Cheers

PwP

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No offense, but the pistol is a bit, uh, blocky. I'm not saying all blockyness is bad, its just that it looks like a block with a texture on it. (and it's massive for a pistol!)

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Posted: 18th Dec 2009 23:31
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Yes, it looks blocky, but it's actually very highly detailed, dunno why it always seems that way in FPSC.

Also, if you think that's massive, check out the Warhammer 40k BOLTER and you'll see what I mean, lol.

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Quote: " if you think that's massive, check out the Warhammer 40k BOLTER and you'll see what I mean, lol."

maybe you should make one.

back on topic, the pistol looks a little toobig. you might want to consider scaleing it down a bit.

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looks nice but you may wanna smooth it out a little

I you send it I could smooth it out in 3ds max, got it last christmas lol but preferd fragmotion for FPSC use

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Quote: "Yes, it looks blocky, but it's actually very highly detailed, dunno why it always seems that way in FPSC."


It really does look like a cardboard cutout, because FPSC isn't going to alter the geometry of anything. I would suggest extruding some more detail out.

Kudos for learning how to animate so quickly though.

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Posted: 19th Dec 2009 03:30 Edited at: 19th Dec 2009 03:31
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Alright, I'll believe toasty, lol, I'll try. I'm making a shotgun that'll include all the improvements people have suggested. But it does look cool (the rifle) for some reason, right? Like the texture made me smile

Quote: "maybe you should make one"


Well, Toasty already made Warhammer weapons and wouldn't that be a copyright issue for using a company trademark or something?

Cheers, thanks for all your comments

PWP

[edit] Just thought of something, what if I called the pistol a LASER Cannon instead? Then it would be size proportionate... right?

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Yeah the rifle looks very cool, even for a cardboard cutout. It should look smashing when it has some more detail though, the basic outline looks like a very cool design.

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Wait, that pistol is meant to be a pistol? How odd, I've never seen a pistol as huge as that - a pistol that is basically layed out as a p90 but with less round edges.

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Posted: 19th Dec 2009 21:29
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I have a surprise comin' up for you guys, still rigging it. You will be thrilled, trust me

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Alright, here's the surprise, and yes it has EAI hands, it just doesn't show much. And if you don't know what it is, then shame on you



That's part of the reload (below) where he hits the bolt...










Don't ask me why I did that, I just felt like it and it was cool. It also gave me good practice on animation...

Cheers

PwP

Oh, and even if I get permission from EAI, there's no way I'm releasing this gun, don't wanna get in trouble

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Is it, and RPG?

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Lovin' the model. Maybe could use a better texture though.

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Quote: "Is it, and RPG?"


Uhm... The most recent one above? If you think it's a Rocket Launcher, you haven't played the famous classic it was from... or heard of it for that matter

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Move the gun down and forward a bit, unless you just cut part of the screen off. If that is an unedited screen, then move it. Right now we can't see much.

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Sorry, will move it later on monday, I'm busy tomorrow.

G'Night,

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PW Productions, you are doing a Great Job on your Guns!! keep up the good work. I wish You and Your Family.. Happy Holidays and a very Safe New Years!

Cheers,
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The gun in the last picture...damn it seems so familiar...just cant quite put my finger on it..*wink* *wink*

Does anybody really even read these?
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Quote: "Uhm... The most recent one above? If you think it's a Rocket Launcher, you haven't played the famous classic it was from... or heard of it for that matter"


I know, I was kidding. Its a Halo Assault Rifle

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Oh, ok

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Posted: 21st Dec 2009 14:41 Edited at: 21st Dec 2009 14:43
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Looks great

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Alright, getting much better.



AND AN RPK:









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WOw, New images look awesome
Look forward to seeing more

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Is that an FAL in the last 3 screens? I'd recommend increasing the lighting to better show off your texture work, but it looks very nice from what I can see.
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Quote: "Is that an FAL"


I think... It was originally textured for Primordial, now I'm going to retexture darker.

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Those later ones are better, yes. They're almost as good as EAI's first WIP thread.

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Wow, thanks Aaagreen

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you should give away the hud of the rigged weapons from EAI

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Those are extremely nice, if you modeled them yourself. Way to go, good job!

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Quote: "you should give away the hud of the rigged weapons from EAI"


I'm not allowed to...

Thanks coach shogun

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