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Posted: 31st Jan 2009 23:46
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I am making a game called "The Invasion" And I hope there will be almost no errors and if there are errors, then I hope it will be easy to fix.
I attached a screenie in jpeg format.

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Is anyone gonna post anything on this?

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Ok... There is no need to worry about people posting...

Your games name is...well, not very creative. That name is very common. Also, is that your best screenie? Are you going to give us your storyline?

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You seriously only left 25 minutes for people to post on a bland, unlit game with a cliche name?

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btw, on these forums, people may post in the next 5 minutes or 5 hours. You never know.

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Story:

You play as a worker named Tommy. One day, he is late at work.
And your job is a security guard.
Everything was peaceful that day until...... A scientific accident goes wrong, spawning the dead from hell creating an.......
INVASION!!!

Your friends and family become one of the zombies and you must kill them in order to rescue some of the survivors! Hopefully his girlfriend, Marion, is one of the survivors.

It is up to you to save the survivors and stop the..... INVASION!!

Or..............


Will you become one of the zombies?

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You know... How familiar does this sound? There is at least 2,000,000,000 games with the same storyline. Mix it up a bit. Add a twist. And add good screenies.

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Posted: 1st Feb 2009 01:50 Edited at: 2nd Feb 2009 19:52
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no screenie

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I was going to say something about mixing genres, but it appears to fit in with your ever changing atmosphere. It certainly is all over the place. LOL I think I like it.

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You need to work on your lighting a little...

And the last screen...What?!?

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This game makes on sense whatsoever, it's awful...

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Posted: 1st Feb 2009 02:32 Edited at: 1st Feb 2009 03:37
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You need to fix up this game a little. Thats all.

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It's not too bad really. You just need to change the story up a bit. OK, try this out....


Pic1 - Your in an antique shop some time in the future when a mannequin comes to life and attacks you. You grab an antique weapon [that just happens to be loaded] and the old shell backfires, knocking you out.

Pic2 - You wake up in some crazy hospital, still dizzy from the explosion and see that your alone except for some strangely dressed guy. You stand up on the bed and back up to the wall, shouting "I know karate!"

Pic3 - The weird guy keeps coming at you, so you run into the bathroom. (not where I would go, I think the guy may be a little funny, if you know what I mean) That's when you notice the glowing sinks and a light coming from an open door.

Pic4 - This must be the research part of the hospital. You see a doctor and approach him. You have many questions, but the doctor won't answer any of them. You know now that something is wrong. (gee, you think?)

Pic5 - Something about drugs.... I don't know, maybe get rid of this one.


Yeah, that's the ticket!

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oh Xplosys...lol

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Xplosys comments were funny! Have you looked at the screenies and then at Xplosys post?

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@xplosys: now THAT makes sense right there.rofl

seriously though you really need to at least pick a genre. The best looking screenie was the one with the doctor and the desk.

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i dont get whats happening in these screens. and after seeing the last one im not sure if i want to

jk, its best if you post screens and explain where each one is in the level to avoid confusion

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Sorry, did I miss something? Is there a reason why Rick Astley is in the last pic?

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Remade story:


You play as a worker named Tommy. One day, he is late at work.
And your job is a security guard.

Everything was peaceful that day until...... A worker named "Erwin" gets fired and want his revenge!
So Erwin creates a machine that spawns dead from the graveyard!


Your friends and family become one of the zombies and you must kill them in order to rescue some of the survivors! Hopefully his girlfriend, Marion, is one of the survivors.

It is up to you to save the survivors and stop..... The Dead!


Or..............


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Errrmmmm.....okay?

So a security guard has the engineering capabilities to make a machine that spawns endless hordes of zombies and Rick Astleys?

You keep switching between the 2nd and 3rd person, your and his...

Why not try something different to the crazy-guy-makes-a-zombie-apocalypse fiasco?

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the only way a story like that would work is if you made a comedic game otherwise its rather flimsy

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Quote: "Errrmmmm.....okay?

So a security guard has the engineering capabilities to make a machine that spawns endless hordes of zombies and
Rick Astleys?
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No! The security guard is good!
The bad guy is another guy named "Erwin."
And that machines DOES NOT spawn Rick Astley! He is not bad until a zombie bites him.

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Oh and the name of the game is now called
"Spawn of the Dead"

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You might get sued by whoever made Dawn of the Dead, I'd change the name if I were you.

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Fine then I will make it "Attack of the dead"

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Those are pretty generic names.

Here are some examples of better names:
-GORE (Graves Of Revenge: Erwin)
-Sepulchure/Sepulture
-Damnation
-Negative:Life
-Six Feet Under

There's a crapload of names you can make up for your horror game. Be creative.

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Quote: "No! The security guard is good!
The bad guy is another guy named "Erwin."
And that machines DOES NOT spawn Rick Astley! He is not bad until a zombie bites him.
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Yeh, if he could make a zombie machine, why was he not working at NASA or something?

And Rick Astley being a boss? Sorry, but no-one'll take you seriously there...

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Sorry Private but Damnation is already taken. It's an upcoming X-Box 360 steampunk shooter made by Codemasters, (Legendary, Turning Point: Fall of Liberty.)

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Rick is not a boss!!

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No, he's a musician to be exact.

You're using a lot of stock media FCR. I know for a fact you can finds thousands of free FPS ready downloads. I'll give some links.

www.fpsfree.com (Xplosys)

www.fps-files.com (Templar)

And of course, our very own models and media board. Simply type in free and click search.

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Quote: "You might get sued by whoever made Dawn of the Dead, I'd change the name if I were you."


Erm, why? Dawn and Spawn are two different words...
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ok i have an idea. ik most of u proly dont know me but ive been usin FPSC for a while, neway, ok so-
ur a security guard,named tommy
you live at your place of work(sorta like the ppl in miitary bases
and your place of work is indeed a military base -maily working on futuristic weapons
one scientist -named Erwin- has been working more on genetics that weapons and is fired because of it(sorta like the riddler from one of the batman movies) Ewin being a bio-engineer decides to take his revenge by unleashing his latest drug,having no idea what it will do(untested) into the facilities air system,infecting everyone including him, you are off base when it happens, when u get back every1 is zombies u check ur radia(being a security guard u have a raido) and u hear that some ppl are held up in a room ont he far side of the facility, blah blah blah, get rid of rick and the girls in bikinis, u can have erwin as a boss if u want. make sure u only start with a pistol(security guard)

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[quote]Erm, why? Dawn and Spawn are two different words..."

Well, Dead Rising for the X-Box 360 doesn't sound anything like Dawn of the Dead, but they got sued because their game took place in a mall similair to Dawn of the Dead's... So...

Dawn of the Dead lost the case, but it's simply outrageous to sue because the game took place in a mall...

P.S: How does the stupid quote thing work? These forums make this far too difficult...

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Quote: "ok i have an idea. ik most of u proly dont know me but ive been usin FPSC for a while, neway, ok so-
ur a security guard,named tommy
you live at your place of work(sorta like the ppl in miitary bases
and your place of work is indeed a military base -maily working on futuristic weapons
one scientist -named Erwin- has been working more on genetics that weapons and is fired because of it(sorta like the riddler from one of the batman movies) Ewin being a bio-engineer decides to take his revenge by unleashing his latest drug,having no idea what it will do(untested) into the facilities air system,infecting everyone including him, you are off base when it happens, when u get back every1 is zombies u check ur radia(being a security guard u have a raido) and u hear that some ppl are held up in a room ont he far side of the facility, blah blah blah, get rid of rick and the girls in bikinis, u can have erwin as a boss if u want. make sure u only start with a pistol(security guard)"



Nice. I might use it as my game's plot! And I will put you in the credits.

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alright cool, and email me (foot_in_mouth_man@embarqmail.com) if u got any other issues i can make segments-signs-doors-arches-textures, stuff like that, im currently making a zombie game aswell so im full of zomie ideas to share.

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Ok. I have decided what to name my game!
"Return of the undead!"

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I am going to launch a demo next Monday.

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I have changed my games plot AGAIN! Sorry Saint Pixie I am not using you idea but I am going to copy some parts of it is that ok?

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Quote: "Well, Dead Rising for the X-Box 360 doesn't sound anything like Dawn of the Dead, but they got sued because their game took place in a mall similair to Dawn of the Dead's... So...

Dawn of the Dead lost the case, but it's simply outrageous to sue because the game took place in a mall..."


That's really stupid.

Was there a case made again Shaun of the Dead? If not then I think "Spawn" is acceptible. Personally I don't think anyone would bother with a free game made with FPSC...

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I will name the name to "Return of the Dead"

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It looks okay, but I would try to make the entitys and the segments co-exist. For example, your hospitle screenshot was great, but the segment doesn't look right. Try a Sci-fi lab segment instead. Work on lighting a bit and improve the storyline, and this game will be getting good reveiws in no time.

PS: Leave the Rick Astley character out of the main storyline if you want this game to be taken seiriously. If you really want to though, put him in an easter egg.

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What is so bad about Rick Astley?

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Ask that to anyone who has been rick rolled number one. Number 2, players will enjoy your game a whole lot more if you add funny easter eggs, such as a rick roll room. Also, retexture some of the "Zombie" models like the bikini zombies, unless they aren't zombies which in that case, why are they in bikinis? The first step of making a good game is the story. If the story is funny or otherwise strange or incomprehensible, the player will stop playing before they even finish. Take your games seiriously, and players will do the same.

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And, uh....stop changing the name/story. This is coming from a veteran of that situation.

I hope you do well with this.

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Remade story:


You play as a worker named Tommy. One day, he is late at work.
And your job is a security guard.
Everything was peaceful that day until a guy called "Erwin" gets fired. Then he got so angry so he decided to make a potion and put it in every tomb.

The next week, he was finished. So when everyone was eating lunch he sneaked in the cafeteria and every tomb and dumped the potion in the peoples lunch and on the dead in the tombs.

So when people ate it........ they became zombies!! Later that day, when people were enjoying Jerry Seinfeld and Kramer's talk show, the zombies came and bit everyone. Including Jerry Seinfeld and Kramer.


Your friends and family become one of the zombies and you must kill them in order to rescue some of the survivors! Hopefully his girlfriend, Marion, is one of the survivors.

It is up to you to save the survivors and stop the..... INVASION!!

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