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FPSC Classic Work In Progress / [LOCKED] smallfishs second game (with demo)

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Posted: 6th Jul 2006 14:37 Edited at: 6th Jul 2006 14:44
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Hi everyone I had this idea going around my head for a bit now it a Victorian sci-fi the idea is the years 2032 and the British empire rules the solar system but mars has rebelled and formed the kingdom of mars and is invading earth starting with London with the city evacuated it up to you to fight of the martens hordes it will have 8 new weapons every thing will at lest be retextured and I hope to get a new sky box and some nice set pieces in and enemy tanks, planes, blimps and a train if it doesn’t make the frame rate go though the floor here’s a pic demo soon

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Posted: 6th Jul 2006 14:50 Edited at: 6th Jul 2006 14:55
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ok here’s the thing I thought you uploaded demos by selecting the folder with all your executables and files and stuff and putting it in the attachments bit but I can’t if I click on it it just opens the folder and I can only select the files one at a time so how do I post demos.
oh and here’s another pic

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Posted: 6th Jul 2006 15:05
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wait a minute I've been looking at the forum and all the demos aren’t attachments the links to there own web sites oops my mistake so were can I go to put my demo level up for download

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Looks really good. I would change the floor texture of second screenshot though.

Make .zip file of your demo. That way you can upload all files in game executable folder. Still a file can be too big to upload in here. Upload it on FileFront for example.

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Posted: 7th Jul 2006 03:23
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Omg! i feel like im visiting an old nigezu re-texturing post

( im just kidding nigezu)

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Posted: 7th Jul 2006 06:35
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What happened to that tank's barrel? The red knda looks good on them.

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Posted: 7th Jul 2006 15:57
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Wait a minute who or what is nigezu and is that an insult I've spent ages this game

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Posted: 7th Jul 2006 16:03
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Oh as for the tank barrel that the damaged tank that came with the fps creator kit I just retextured it and turned it in to an enemy. But that will not make it in to the game as I'm working on a custom tank that’s got a more world war one feel to it here a work in progress pic

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Posted: 7th Jul 2006 20:12
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Quote: "Wait a minute who or what is nigezu and is that an insult I've spent ages this game"

I am.

He was just kidding about my old retextures that looked really crap.

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Posted: 7th Jul 2006 21:01
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Like nigezu stated it was a joke...idc how much time you spent on this... but most of the stuff doesnt match...the the wall...the the flags...the flags make it look blegh
just try and match the textures and objects more

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Posted: 9th Jul 2006 03:40
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Looks pretty good but in the second shot you should make it smaller and add more enities .
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Posted: 10th Jul 2006 16:23 Edited at: 10th Jul 2006 16:40
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Hay bloodeath this game is going to be free so if you don’t like it you can take your comments and stuff them up your a..... Wait I don’t want to jump the gun just keep your comments more constructive and less insulting..ok

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Hey i gave you my advice...if you dont like it tough... thats what i think it is as constructive as it gets...it lists what makes the screenshot look blegh instead of great... and hay is somthing horses eat...Hey is somthing you say to state hello :p

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Posted: 12th Jul 2006 16:02 Edited at: 12th Jul 2006 16:10
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hay and hey sound exactly the same so you can forgive me for making an mistake and it wasn’t the advise I was angry about I was still sore about the texture joke I mean there are some people on the forum who don’t even use custom texture they just use the premade ones why don’t you go pick on them.
Oh and if were pointing out spellings blegh isn't a word

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Posted: 13th Jul 2006 17:18 Edited at: 13th Jul 2006 17:20
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I put my game demo in a zip file made with win zip and tried to up load it on to the forum but when I posted it the wed page started to post but when the little green bar reached the end nothing happened and I left it for an age.
Then I tried to email it to a friend and the same thing happened when I made the demo an attachment. Any ideas why this happened?

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Posted: 25th Jul 2006 13:52
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Since my textures ant the best I’m going to use mostly if not all edited photos for my wall textures what do you think

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Posted: 29th Jul 2006 18:20
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dont worry bout what blooddeath says, this game looks awesome!

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Posted: 29th Jul 2006 18:23
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dude you models in your first screenie look real! did you make them?

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I just retextured everything and as for the walls in the last screen shot they were all edited photos....and wait you really like my game that’s great this is the sort of post I need it really gives me the urge to get back to making the game

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Hey small fish.

I think blooddeath's comments were much more constructive than da power pwnereder's.

What's the point in posting screenies if people can't comment on what they don't like? I'd much rather someone said:
"Nice, but I can see a gap in that texture"
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"Dude this is so awsome you're like a god"
and da power pwnerer always just tells people their games are awesome.

anyway. Here are my comments.


The soldiers in the first screenie look REALLY nice. The red looks cool on them. Im not gonna comment on the background, cuz I'm guessing that pic was just showcasing the models.

I'm guessing the second screenie is gonna finish up as Paddington station? The roof looks just right, and I really like it. But like blooddeath said, the flags look out of place. I don't know if you're from the UK, but we're not very patriotic in our country. And even if they were flags they'd be England flags... not British Flags.

I'm not gonna knock your textures. They might not be the same professional quality as those you see in the stock media, but the fact is that (thank god) you actually made your own, and that really sets you appart from like 99999999million other kids just churning out what is effectively the same stock media game.

Conclusion : Its obviously gonna look alot better when it's done, but I think it's got definite potential to be a great game (and I love the Neo-Victorian future thing, thats cool)

Peace and Keep up the good work

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Posted: 31st Jul 2006 22:34
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thats not true, i post what i think

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Posted: 3rd Aug 2006 13:42 Edited at: 3rd Aug 2006 13:43
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your right I've got a real charter flaw I tend to make something then ask someone there opinion and if they give any negative opinions I have a fit and it really immature (considering I'm 21)
Anyway I’m working on it. Back to the original subject I have been working hard on the textures and got some new pic to show and I promise to not lose my temper over any negative opinion by the way on a side note I am English and I like that flag

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Posted: 3rd Aug 2006 14:00
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Here is a new officer

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Posted: 3rd Aug 2006 14:00
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and a new tank

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Posted: 3rd Aug 2006 14:01
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and a high street

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Posted: 3rd Aug 2006 14:04
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And some of a conversation I hope to have a team of other officers that you talk to all the way though the game

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Posted: 3rd Aug 2006 14:07
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Well what do you think? Like I said negative comment are ok this time

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that looks much better i like the holland and parrat thing lol cool retexture and i s ths game a ww2 game cus the tank dont relli look like a ww2 tank ok
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my my no I hate ww2 games they are all the same I find my self shooting the same gun at the same Nazis dull dull dull no my game is meant to be like a sci-fi written in the Victorian era how they would think the future would look like so Britain is still an empire and have colonised mars and the rest of the solar system but mars has grown in to a massive empire and has formed a dictator ship called the kingdom of mars and was planning to invade and take over earth starting with London but just before the invasion an assassin shot the self proclaimed king of mars and put him in a comer now with the king out the picture his son has taken control and leads the invasion force of THE PRINCIPALITY OF MARS (that’s what I'm going to call the game if you don't like the name just say and I will try to think of anther one)
Any way back to the original question the tank and all the weapon in the game will be a total mix up some will be lasers some will more covenantal I will have biplanes and steam train and I even working on a MECH so I hope you like

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ohhh cool
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i hate to stroll off topic but why does everyone spell my name wrong


it is not

BLOODDEATH <---- no thats wrong

Blegh is not a word, its a sound...i use blegh to describe somthing not good becuase its what i say when somthings mediocre

yes its good that you made custom textures thats awesome, but i just met they dont fit with the flag im sorry if took what i ment wrong
but still



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Sorry about misspelling your name I was acting very immature if in future you want to give any comment about my work just say what you think and I will listen. By the way you only mentioned the train station pic what do you think about my textures for the mars solders are they ok?

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the retexture of the old guy? its alright, but, instead of red shirt make it like a light brown, and make the pants look like they have a couple crinkles in em` then it would look great

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right as for the red that’s kind of the mars royal uniform but now that I think about it brown would look nice maybe I will make one with a brown uniform and make him a engineer or something

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Dont hijack others threads.

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Posted: 7th Aug 2006 17:16
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Err if you look at an earlier tread I said that I tried to post a demo in a zipped folder but when I posted it would just do the loading post sign you know the little bar then it did nothing and I left it for ages

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Posted: 7th Aug 2006 20:34 Edited at: 7th Aug 2006 20:37
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Put some furniture in screen 2!

EDIT: why are they using ww2 weapons in the far future?

otherwise it looks great.



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I am working on new weapon but remember this is Victorian sci-fi so if there are laser and there will be they will look like Victorian rifles any ways I’ve got some pics of my guns on another tread give me a minute and I will post them here

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Posted: 8th Aug 2006 15:30
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here is a mars laser rifle

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Posted: 8th Aug 2006 15:32
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And a shell pistol a sort of pocket rocket launcher

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nice, can you show some textured guns ingame?



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Posted: 18th Aug 2006 16:26
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working on it give me a day or to

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sorry to go off topic but $knight$ that doesnt look like your work it looks like silvermasters and stop bleddy middle posting!!!!!!

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I like the model texture in the first pic, buuuut...they all look the same so its sorta funny. CLONE WARS!

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this forum will not up load zip folders I just tried to made a new demo and upload it but the same fault as last time so next time I will make a smaller demo (50mb) and use a file uploaded.
But this makes me think what about when I finish the game where will I put it I have never made a web site before I would not know where to begin would anyone let me put the game on there web site?

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Hay I have just had a great idea space combat zero g battles I could have a level were you fight on the outside of a space ship
I could make everyone slow down and silence all the guns and give everyone space suits what do you think?

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Posted: 21st Aug 2006 16:14 Edited at: 21st Aug 2006 16:21
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I have made a little mistake since nearly all my textures are photos when I take a picture of a shop to use in my game I get a little reflex ion of myself on the window I could just say its a mini game spot all the times I appear in a texture but really it a mistake

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Posted: 21st Aug 2006 16:18
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I'm using edited old newspapers to tell the story in cut scenes snazzy right

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Is anyone still looking at this tread? If anyone comes across this and hasn’t said anything please do so now people looking at my work is what keeps me making stuff

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Posted: 23rd Aug 2006 18:57
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This is an enemy for the space levels but I can't get the blighter animated

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